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ragingbatpony
I am a simple guy from a small town who wants to be either a writer or a doctor.
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All right let's see this redo I'm looking forward to it
8755315
thanks, I have big plans for this story, go ahead and vote on my newest blog post if your interested.
And it begins
Ok now what kind of chaos shall we bring
8755699
indeed it does, my friend, indeed it does
The synopsis seems incomplete. Was this intentional?
One big question, and this is the first time I can ask it. Why use the Star of Chaos if this isn't a Warhammer crossover? or did I miss something?
8794801
thanks for the question, the reason I'm using a star of chaos is that it's actually an ancient symbol for chaos.
8794387
thx for pointing that out.
nope!
When someone new/different is speaking make a new paragraph it’ll make it look better
8795694
thanks for your input, I'll be sure to put it into practice
silly luna and her guard ponies you guys are not invited
8800141
i know, it's very rude to crash someone else's party.
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Symbol_of_Chaos
8794835
Ancient? I'm pretty sure that it first showed up in the 60's
This whole fic feels familiar so far...
Like it's similar to one of the ones I found not long after I found the site.
8801528
Same here
So I think this is the third replace discord I am reading, now the thought I have is, will it be trying to pick up where they had left off or will the story be forging it's own path. I guess time will tell.
8801432
i read somewhere that it's greek but regardless I love that symbol of chaos so I used it
8801748
hopefully, this story will successfully forge it's own path, as I have some interesting ideas
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8801631
I think you are referring to A New Lord of Chaos by Bookish_Devil.
8801748
Really? I found at least four of those.
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By any chance, have you read A New Lord of Chaos by Bookish_Devil? Because your story is the most similar by far, nothing wrong with that, I'm just making an observation. Good luck with the story, I'm eager to see where it goes.
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i actually have but not in a long time, it was actually the first fic i read on this site
8807188
Ok, I was just wondering.
I suggest getting an editor, a few sentences spoken by different characters are stuck together.
8806659
I've most likely remember the ones that kept my interest enough for me to be worth remember. I might have seen more just not remember them off the top of my head.
infinite back up plans
That was awesome can't wait to see the next chapter
I vote for celestia or Luna. Whichever is more likely to win. Xd
AWESOME story man! More! Must have MOAR!!!
Xd
Continue please
this is awesome
Very interesting, I hope to read more when you get more wrote.
This is one of the coolest fics I have seen so can you at least tell us if the next chapter will come out within the year
please
8901219
it will come out within the next month two at the latest, school is becoming a problem, so unfortunately, life takes precedent
8801528
same
*FLUTTERSHY YAY*
8801528
It is almost word for word so far
Good job keep it up
AWESOME!
Also I don't know if it was intentional but half way down one of the paragraphs seems to end abruptly with no period at the end. I smirked and set my cane on the rack next to my throne and sat down before feeling eyes on me. I turned to find Celestia
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thank you, I just noticed it myself and I am in the process of fixing it.
edit: just fixed it.
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Yes... It almost is.
“ITS ALIVE ALIVE” WOOOOOOOOOOO
8935831
yes, it is my friend.
8935839
WEEE!!!! YAY!!! HAZZAH!!!
Hmm, didn't you made a story but gave up because you put alot on time on the train or something?
-sees My Female Bat Pony Self in this chapter-
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! My Female Bat Pony Self has finally appeared in a MLP Fan Fic for the 1st time EVAR!!!!!! <3 <3 <3 <3
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you're welcome.
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:3
I hope she will appear in another chapter soon :3
Interesting premise, but pretty bad execution as far as writing skills go. Mechanically, the first chapter is... lacking.
Still rough to read. Run-on sentences and rambling abound.