Rainbow Dash rents out an luxury resort to take you on a week long getaway; the only thing she asks for in return is a little help with estrus. Not even Celestia herself could crash this party...or so you thought.
9863168 9995176 10404477 10719772 10966040 It lives! 10796892 Thanks for the kind words! Looking back at the last time I posted an update makes me realize just how quickly time has gone by. It feels strange because this story has always been in the back of my mind, bugging me to finish it, I just got too busy and by the time I got back around to writing I felt like I'd forgotten where I was taking it. I think I've found a way forward now, and hopefully everyone who is still following can enjoy it.
“We came all the way out here to avoid your parents. I better hear you yell at the top of your lungs!”
I thought this cave system would echo back to the resort leading to a very different kind of awkward dinner.
“Oh, and whoever got that sauna going…sorry for stealing it, but you’re my hero!”
After the sauna being turned on was introduced, I thought Dash’s parents were going to be in a cloud of fog on the other side of it. But I’m sure they heard it all given how fast they arrived at the patio door.
It's amazing how this went from an amazing story to something I'm dropping in less than a chapter. The inclusion of her parents butting in ruined everything up to this point. They should have just said, "Hey, Mom, Dad? Dash is deep in heat and we came here to get away from EVERYPONY else. Your presence is poorly timed. You can do what you want here, but so will we and we won't hide it."
Fuck this avoidance and sneaking around bullshit. I don't care if they are her parents, they should damn well know what estrus does to a mare. Absolutely tanked my interest in the story.
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Thanks for the kind words! Looking back at the last time I posted an update makes me realize just how quickly time has gone by. It feels strange because this story has always been in the back of my mind, bugging me to finish it, I just got too busy and by the time I got back around to writing I felt like I'd forgotten where I was taking it. I think I've found a way forward now, and hopefully everyone who is still following can enjoy it.
IT'S BACK!
*<>* great story progression . worth th wait
The hell what year is it? It's been so long I gotta go back and reread the previous chapters so I can remember the story
Holy shit, it's alive!
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I cant believe it’s alive!
Aww, that was worth the wait!
Alright! Thanks for posting a new chapter!
Fuck yeah! After four long years, this legend returns when we need him most! Awesome!
I reread this story every year just because I love the chemistry in this one, so glad to see it's return
Not only did I really enjoy this chapter, you taught me something new! How delightful! Thank you for all you do and keep up the good work!
Yay it's alive
Wait wait wait...... Do Pegasi lay eggs? She didnt answer the damn question!
So glad to see this update!
Holly shiiiit! New Chapter!
I thought this cave system would echo back to the resort leading to a very different kind of awkward dinner.
After the sauna being turned on was introduced, I thought Dash’s parents were going to be in a cloud of fog on the other side of it. But I’m sure they heard it all given how fast they arrived at the patio door.
MOAR CHAPTERS!!!!
So they do realize they’re intruding on a honeymoon. But did it anyway.
If they try and use that sauna, they’re gonna realize real quick that they’re also risking preventing those grandfoals they were asking about.
It's amazing how this went from an amazing story to something I'm dropping in less than a chapter. The inclusion of her parents butting in ruined everything up to this point. They should have just said, "Hey, Mom, Dad? Dash is deep in heat and we came here to get away from EVERYPONY else. Your presence is poorly timed. You can do what you want here, but so will we and we won't hide it."
Fuck this avoidance and sneaking around bullshit. I don't care if they are her parents, they should damn well know what estrus does to a mare. Absolutely tanked my interest in the story.
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Clearly your tastes are superior, then. Let's take a look at your preferred reading material.
Your top 4 groups are Futa, Foalcon, Incest, and My Little Toilet
I see that your interests are beyond my comprehension, but please realize that for many of us smut is a cheap alternative to relationships.
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I'm actually wheezing at this.