It was really cute and I like the interaction with Bow and Wendy.

“—You moved in next to us?” She’s more flabbergasted than angry.

It'd be fun if Rainbow's parents made more noise than her and Anon.
I'm absolutely loving this story so far.

Excellent chapter name. I'm thoroughly enjoying the story so far. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

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i think you posted to soon man

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Ehhh, it’s only been a couple months. Compared to the wait between the last two chapters, it hasn’t been that long, yet. XD

The sexy parts are a bit crazy, but the story has a reason for that. I like the awkwardness of the parents and I hope to see more of this in the future.

A wild plot development appeared!

Do continue.

Also, yeah, I think it's fair to say that if I'm in at chapter 4, I'm enjoying the story. Have a like.

So is this going to continue? Or is it dead?

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"Hello, I came here to tell you I am displeased with the fact that I have found this story."
Nobody fucking cares.

Is this history dead?, please dont let it die

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Aww man I want more of this

Absolutely fantastic! I'd loved for this to continue, but if it doesn't it still managed to end very well, with a good bit of character and a high, hopeful note.

Wonderful end to this chapter! Hopefully we can get some more?

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"It hasn't been that long, yet."
Damn dude...

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And now I sit and make a fine meal of those words, as I realize, sadly, that it has been nearly two years already since this updated.

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Such a shame too, it really was a brilliant story.
Hopefully he comes back someday.

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We can but hope, I suppose.

Aww, ran out of adorable Dashie romance words... gonna have to find another story like it.

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I felt the same way to be honest. I envisioned it as a honeymoon-esque slice of life retreat centered around feel good smut and worldbuilding with a few "side quests" but I suppose that's not enough. I know it's been a while, but I'm sitting down and looking at how to recover it and continue.

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Well, I definitely plan on exploring the pregnancy conundrum. That was one of my biggest heartaches with Xenophilia. I felt like they really planted the seeds of relationship failure with the route they took, and I want to really confront the topic in that regard. The introduction of her parents was also going help Dash mature...or at least Anon is expecting that. They're not going to be taking the Ring to Mordar by the end of the story but I intended for them to have some nice takeaways from the whole experience and leave it different than they went it.

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I am sincerely sorry for the wait. Hold the line, there will be words.

Fellas writing takes time. No need to stress out the author, I'm pretty sure the story isn't dead haha

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Honestly hearing you plan on finishing this story fills me with abundant happiness. "Excuses" and this so far are two of my favorite FIMFictions ever. I love your writing style and how you personify Dash. The raunchy stuff is perfectly blended with the feel good romance stuff. Thanks for writing it like you have so far. I would be willing to pay money for a good ending, lol!

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Bro I'm begging you. Don't be that writefag. Please finish this story. The prequel to this was legendary and I need to see the conclusion.

It's great to have a comeback to the world of the non-horny for just a moment hahah.