I have to say, these were both pretty sexy. Nice work!

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Thanks! Glad to hear that I gave you a couple of fun reads. I've got the third nearly finished as well, so look out for that next month.

As someone who has a big thing for adultery, this series is really meeting my expectations! Shining AND Filthy are fabulous stallions to utilize in stories like these, and I'll eagerly await seeing what you do with that kinky Prince next~

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Glad you've enjoyed the entries so far! You and me both have similar tastes then, in regards to forbidden fruit. Adultery is a very fun theme to play with (heck, my first story featured it), and in gay fics, it comes naturally; after all, lots of married guys have fun on the side to satisfy those urges, just like Rich enjoys on his vacation. As fun as it is to write, I think I want to try and vary my themes a bit on why a stallion would want to keep their same-sex antics secretive; most of my ideas for this series consist of some measure of adultery so far, even if it's not the main theme. One with Sunburst comes to mind, on why he's not keen on heeding his mother's plans for him to marry a mare, but he doesn't want to disappoint her, so he keeps his sexuality a secret.

I always love adultery stories, I can't wait so see what happens next.

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Thanks, they can be a sinful sort of fun! Just as Shining's tale continues, maybe I'll pay Filthy's room another visit in the future, and see what he's got in mind for that unsuspecting, adorably-femmy housekeeper working his way down the hall?

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Would be great to revisit those two again, I wonder what it would be like for Flutershy's father committing adultery?

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Not sure, I'd have to think more about him as a character. Shining and Filthy came somewhat easy in how I imagined them in these scenarios translated on the page. I'd have to find an idea for Flutter's father than I'd like, and do some pondering on how to portray him. Still, ideas for this collection kinda pop into my head randomly or though experience both personal and third-hand.

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It's just an idea, I am not sure either how you could get Mister Shy to commit adultery with a stallion without being cohered into doing it, unless he is into secret kink that is so weird and obscure that you would be hard press to find someone with a similar kink. Then again there could be something about his could collection that he is very tight lip about it...

That was fucking hot! I like reading gay male clop. (I'm a straight female). Loved the build up and the Daddy play. I don't know why, but that kind of clop turns me on.

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I hear yah! It's my cup of tea too; and as I've said, I write the kind of stories I want to read which means that Daddy talk really gets my motor running. I've met quite a few gals who enjoy gay erotica, so you're not alone on that. Glad to hear that not only the stallions out there can get some satisfaction from my smutty writing, but the mares too!