A ghoul in a world he no longer recognises. A unicorn with a secret none can know. A mare with a troubled past. A legendary treasure. What good comes from waking the dead?
8799491 I'm glad you're enjoying it! I'm always up for pre-readers for help catching the little things, though due to my location g-docs isn't an option annoyingly.
Hope I keep up to your standards, and thank you for reading!
Keep up to your standards he say and upload a chapter the day after I have caught up with the story, what nerve! Its an advice that I have given a few others, so I will share it with you as well. Instead of uploading your chapters when they are done, try to put them up on a schedule, with your chapter lengths would I say one a month would be a good pace. That way do you not scare potential new readers away with your productivity, and believe you me I have been scared away from stories, feeling that I never would be able to catch up with them. Another good thing about the backlog is that if shit hits the fan, and it will at some point, do you have something to fall back on, and if you ever want to change a few details and such because you come up with a better idea is it easier to change in unpublished chapters than some that already have been shared. Win-win-win all around would I say!
Fuck you... Fuck you on the horn of Luna, to the moon and back again for making that song stuck in my brain! No amount of wasteland brain bleach, no megaspell of mental health regeneration, will cure me from that tune!
“Thanks for the vote of confidence, Two, but this is dictatorship, not a democracy,”
Overstallion Doom supports this dictatorship, him running his own free dictatorship back at home Stable!
"Be awesome!", that line have been used in so many stories by now, the statuette been given like a dozen times in the stories that I have read, and people trying to make them into potions to drink and what not... And yet none have caught the amazing spirit of the figures as you have, adding a backside to a too shining medal. What you just did in this chapter... now that is what lifts this story over so many others, that I saw the most of this chapter almost animated in my head as a shortmovie is another and way way smaller detail that we shouldn't talk too much about thou.
Nitpicks: " hunting for me my saviour but found no-one new in the room." Delete " I think we should stop shooting at each other and atthe pricks we should be shooting at," At the
This chapter. Dear god, this is what Fallout is all about! More, sir! Seriously though, this is some good stuff. This chapter really is a microcosm of everything good about Fallout.
8799491
I'm glad you're enjoying it! I'm always up for pre-readers for help catching the little things, though due to my location g-docs isn't an option annoyingly.
Hope I keep up to your standards, and thank you for reading!
Keep up to your standards he say and upload a chapter the day after I have caught up with the story, what nerve! Its an advice that I have given a few others, so I will share it with you as well. Instead of uploading your chapters when they are done, try to put them up on a schedule, with your chapter lengths would I say one a month would be a good pace. That way do you not scare potential new readers away with your productivity, and believe you me I have been scared away from stories, feeling that I never would be able to catch up with them. Another good thing about the backlog is that if shit hits the fan, and it will at some point, do you have something to fall back on, and if you ever want to change a few details and such because you come up with a better idea is it easier to change in unpublished chapters than some that already have been shared. Win-win-win all around would I say!
Fuck you... Fuck you on the horn of Luna, to the moon and back again for making that song stuck in my brain! No amount of wasteland brain bleach, no megaspell of mental health regeneration, will cure me from that tune!
Overstallion Doom supports this dictatorship, him running his own free dictatorship back at home Stable!
"Be awesome!", that line have been used in so many stories by now, the statuette been given like a dozen times in the stories that I have read, and people trying to make them into potions to drink and what not... And yet none have caught the amazing spirit of the figures as you have, adding a backside to a too shining medal. What you just did in this chapter... now that is what lifts this story over so many others, that I saw the most of this chapter almost animated in my head as a shortmovie is another and way way smaller detail that we shouldn't talk too much about thou.
Nitpicks:
" hunting for me my saviour but found no-one new in the room." Delete
" I think we should stop shooting at each other and atthe pricks we should be shooting at," At the
This chapter. Dear god, this is what Fallout is all about! More, sir! Seriously though, this is some good stuff. This chapter really is a microcosm of everything good about Fallout.