A ghoul in a world he no longer recognises. A unicorn with a secret none can know. A mare with a troubled past. A legendary treasure. What good comes from waking the dead?
I hate this moment when I have caught up with a story that I have fallen in love with more than anything else... But it seems that this story is still in its infancy and growing quickly, so that is a nice change of pace compared to some of the other stories on my list that haven't been updated in the 2 years that I have been away from this site.
I know that it dosn't mean much, but had you more nitpicks for me to pick at would I have offered myself as a pre-reader to get a snoop in on your next chapters before the rest get them, but you seem to have things under control and I can honestly not really see how I could be able to polish on this story beside sending positive vibes with each and every comment that I write.
Nitpick "She struggled to remove the belt until the explosions tore from her to pieces." Maybe is it my Danish brain, but I can't see what the from are doing here.
Poor Hard, he'll go psycho at this rate, hope his fun mode and serious mode never meet at the same time.
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Thank you kindly for the nitpicking! Any help to polish this is greatly appreciated!
As for "knights who resuce the prince" - who do you think is doing the rescuing?
Side note, don't let it get you down! I don't want people discouraged because of my writing, it's the exact opposite of why I write ><
I hate this moment when I have caught up with a story that I have fallen in love with more than anything else... But it seems that this story is still in its infancy and growing quickly, so that is a nice change of pace compared to some of the other stories on my list that haven't been updated in the 2 years that I have been away from this site.
I know that it dosn't mean much, but had you more nitpicks for me to pick at would I have offered myself as a pre-reader to get a snoop in on your next chapters before the rest get them, but you seem to have things under control and I can honestly not really see how I could be able to polish on this story beside sending positive vibes with each and every comment that I write.
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"She struggled to remove the belt until the explosions tore from her to pieces." Maybe is it my Danish brain, but I can't see what the from are doing here.