Where am I? Wait, what? I'm a Queen?! HOW THE FUCK-?!
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Great work
9472530 Strange, I thought it was already in the group. I'll have to see about adding it in. Also, thank you for pointing those mistakes out.
9472560 Thank you!
A little question that popped in my head, while reading this chapter, was; How can we trust ponies? As in have them NOT to butt in on other nations thing's, when said nation has not done ANYTHING illegal or has not threatened anyone( and do they do that to OTHER nations too, or they just overly worried about Storm islands growing power compared to theirs)? But I guess that's what's going to keep happening with their whistle-blower methods. Would like to hear what sisters are potentially talking behind their closed doors...
Keep it up
Liked the feels of this chapter, and I am laughing out at the ponies' distrust at having massive firepower superiority due to their cultural bias towards 'friendship-ing others'.
Which probably explains their guards' near worthlessness, if you think about it.
I am left to wonder though... when will the Dark rise its head? What about the Minotaurs' beef with the Storm Queen?
But I digress, it was a nice chapter, very slice-of-life.
Just read the whole thing, and I have to say, this is probably the best displaced story i've ever read.
From the start, I enjoyed the way you sent the character off, instead of having the stereotypical Merchant and convention, you give her a unique situation. And you way you grew her character, i also liked, as instead of doing something like, "wowee look im in Equestria, better go make besties with everyone, kill absolutely everything that dared look in my general, and fuck every single living thing i possibly can," you put her far of from these characters, giving her her own problems rather than, damn which way am i gonna kill the villain this time. As well as giving her actual emotions, far too many times the main character is a heartless idiot, who can randomly kill everything, while not caring in the slightest, at least you tried to give your character a driving cause, basic as it may be.
Finally, the crossover, as soon as i see a crossover in a story, i abandon ship right there, as i know it's gonna be 5 chapters of misery, as it doesnt advance the plot, or develop the protagonist in the slightest. but the way you introduced, interacted with, and used these characters, makes me very happy.
I'm not very good at describing things, so TLDR, Im loving this story and i hope you keep up the good work!
9473565 I greatly appreciate your feedback, dear reader, though I'm not so sure it's the best Displaced story. Still, thank you, it means a lot to hear you say that, and I'm very happy you enjoyed the story so much.
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Maybe not the best overall, i'll admit, I was pretty hasty saying that, but it's by far one of the, if not the, most enjoyable displaced stories i've read.
9473632 Thank you, the praise is greatly appreciated, dear reader.
Nice, this fic has been one of my must-read for some time now, and you still amaze me
9480344 Thank you.
It's a good starting point, I look forward to seeing Tempest's procres both personally as well in her studies.
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Thank you both! Glad you liked it!
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Your welcome
AWESOME story!
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Why thank you, dear reader, I appreciate the praise!
any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?
Okay I now want Suki's sword.
9723712 *Chuckles* As do I.