Where am I? Wait, what? I'm a Queen?! HOW THE FUCK-?!
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My advanced Christmas gift was given! The Storm Queen lives!![:pinkiegasp:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiegasp.png)
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Even with the flaws, it was a nice chapter - quite engaging.
I'll be waiting with bated breath for the next release.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
8984042 Good to hear that you still enjoyed it, my friend. With any luck, the next chapter should come out some time this week.
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That is good to know - to have a conclusion the 'guest stars', and focus on Lucette's endeavours.
Well, until next time!![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
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Quite engaging, you say. How so?
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Even if I knew that OP guest stars would kick arse, it still drew my interest as to how they'd go about it.
And between the salty dragons, the mosh-pit, and the mind-games... well, I can say my sadistic urges were satisfied. No 'superspells' cast to break them all in one fingersnap, no 'suppa-weapons' to leave them wishing for a death that would never come.
Just simple fighting, with some strategy thrown in by the most disadvantaged of the participants.
But again, I want to see how badly will the Minotaur ruler lose it when everything goes out the window.
Thus, I explained why I felt this chapter to be engaging despite the 'Guests's' urges and attitudes. I am really interested in seeing where will this go for Lucette.
What about you?
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It was very refreashing writing this with Timeless and Maz. Not going all out, using your quick wits and skills, and all that jazz. While also showing a new ability they have obtained.
A rather enjoyable chapter.
Very nice matches there. Waiting to see some more of that, and more political thing's...![:derpytongue2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/derpytongue2.png)
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I'm glad you all enjoyed it. Truly, it warms my heart, as well as makes me relieved. I was honestly fretting about whether or not I'd executed things well enough the whole way through.
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Bro, you’re not the only one. And it is quite the juggling we went through.
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My belief is this: if it is planned well enough and executed good enough, a collaboration between authors can do the job very well without coming up as an asspull (aka. Deus Ex Machina).
Sadly, the 'crossovers' do tend to eliminate either 'conflict' or 'urgency' if they are executed poorly.
Well, until next time!![:yay:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/yay.png)
8984511 Well, here's next time.
Have a new chapter!
...Sorta. Look for number 12.5.
8985252 Tis good to hear that it cleared some things up. Now all that's left is the final chapter of the Tournament, and arguably the most shell-shocking one.
Well I must say that this chapter was rather enjoyable. I agree with FTR that it was expected that the OP guests would win, it was still well made enough to be exciting and just fun to read. i still despise most of the Doom Marines (Hunters cool though) but you made it work (or you guys made it work, I honestly don't know how exactly a crossover works for writing wise). So yeah, fantastic job and I eagerly await more.
8986381 Well, I'm simply happy to have made it work, and even more so to have made it enjoyable for you. I hope you have more pleasant days of reading in your future, dear reader.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
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Okay... Any reason why you despise the other Doom Marines? Also, what did you like about Hunter?
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Well, it's essentially their personalities. I find them just annoying and stereotypical(mainly berserker and runner, the others are essentially blank slates to me due to lack of anything from them really). I get what the characters are going for and that they have a backstory to back it up (I think, haven't read their story but from what's been said here)but I just feel contempt for them whenever they open their mouths. Berserker is the chaos space marine guy who is just always angry and always a dick. Runner is crazy for crazys sake (his backstory why makes sense but it doesn't change his annoying devil may care attitude). Hunter fills the stereotype of the cool silent badass type (I'm biased for this one, I find this type cool). The others are practically background characters for how much they actually act in the story so far (nothing really wrong here with them). I always find stories where the main character is dick/asshole, but ends up getting what they want, to be annoying (sometimes these can be good if the story is written well enough but most times it's a bad power fantasy). I get that feeling from these Doom Marines. If these are your characters, Imean no ill will, I'm just saying that they don't seem to be my cup of tea.
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Fair enough, and yes, they are my characters. And don’t worry, we’re all a little biased about something we really like.
8987699 You mean like me and my love for Poki Sticks?
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Something like that, yes. But hey! You enjoy it, so why shouldn’t you?
Woo nice job Storm team!
Very well done, this is.