8550576 Don't you dare give yourself shit! This is a good start and I can definitely see it happening in the 40k universe. Sabotaged warp travel, unknown planet reached and so on. Keep up writing.
Also, don't listen to that neigh sayer. It's a good story off to a good start! And it's not a tag salad, the tags actually describs the story quite well. Again, looking forward to more chaptera.
Bad cover art and tag salad. Helluva welcome you put out there.
8550576
Don't you dare give yourself shit! This is a good start and I can definitely see it happening in the 40k universe. Sabotaged warp travel, unknown planet reached and so on. Keep up writing.
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Bad cover art?
I like it and I look forward to more.
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I personally love the cover art!
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Also, don't listen to that neigh sayer. It's a good story off to a good start! And it's not a tag salad, the tags actually describs the story quite well. Again, looking forward to more chaptera.
8552991
I paid no mind to it really. Besides it's a place holder until I finish the color version.
After surviving a what? An assassination attempt? An extermination attempt? A navigation system sabotage attempt?
Just curious, lol
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8553764
Did you not read the chapter?
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