8558641 maybe other story where the princesses (including Cadence, Twilight and Ember, maybe Skystar) will have their 'adventure' with Spike. But not Chrysallis
8560052 This is proving my point. I'm not thanking you, nor was Belifurn referring to you when he/she said they remembered and use to read all of the person their comment was directed to's stuff (which by the way is me). You really need to learn how to use this site, but, considering you're still stuck on THE CAPS BUTTON, I don't see that happening.
8561084 Beside the fact it makes you look like you don't know how to turn the caps lock off? Or know even the basics of grammar? It looks bad. You think scenery and plot aren't a necessary part of a story. You rushed everything and you have tons of people commenting as such but you'd rather ignore people who are telling you whats wrong and needs fixed to help your story and you improve as an author for the "MOAR!"s. You're not going to improve because you don't really want too. You ignore good advice and make excuses for why its not for you. "English is my second language." If I wanted something I wrote to be in... say, French I'd get a native French person who excels in English to go over it and tell me what should be where and how this should be this way so that it makes sense when written. You ignore basic rules of writing like describing your characters appearance and what they're doing because you "want to get to the story." if I asked you to show one published book that follows your "type of story" I'd bet heavily you couldn't.
I tried to help, least no one can accuse me otherwise.
8561861 I can understand the grammar part but CAPSLOCK? Every writers has their own writing style. Some like likes to put scenery first before the story. Some like to put both scenery and some unrelated things before the story. A few just like me, went straight to the story. About capslock title, I follow the great writers such as Steven Spielberg and George Lucas.
I don't mind you critics the story because I welcome it but I do mind if you critics my writing style and expect to follow and copy your writing style. Yes, English is my second language but that doesn't mean the first language user is perfect in speaking English that they can criticize the Second Language User and Third Language User. Like I said, I appreciate about your critics about grammar but not about my writing style.
Spielberg doesn't do that, he uses a large font on Movie Posters just as George Lucas doesn't do that. STAR WARS Isn't written like that it's written Star Wars. Typography is a style of art commonly used on movie posters to create an appealing and eye catching effect. They don't just cap lock everything they put it in a specific location at specific angles in specific ways to create an effect. The same is true of book covers. However find one time where Lucas writes STAR WARS in his autobiography or anywhere else for that matter in caps. I think it's equally funny you took two men who excel at scenery as your great writers you follow. Equally true, I don't care if you read what I write, I said any of the writers on here who are doing great. Even funnier perhaps, anyone whose read my work, knows my strength and what people tend to like the most in my writing is characterization not scenery. You're trying to say that you can skip entire areas of writing because its your style. Oh, and one of my stories has an entire chapter in utter darkness and is nothing but internal dialogue. It works fantastically for a hook because it creates a interesting situation that readers are interested to find out whats happening, jumping around at light speed does not. Style is something that improves and grows with experience for any author wanting to get better. You are using it as an excuse to justify short comings.
This was clearly a waste of time and effort on my part to try and help you be a better author not just an "okay" one. There are people who will actually use the help and critic to improve beyond knowing their grammar has major issues and having it pointed out. I look forward to helping them.
8628620 "He's not ignorant. Just doesn't have knowledge." that's literally what ignorant means: "ig·no·rant /ˈiɡnərənt/ adjective: lacking knowledge or awareness in general, or about something in particular; uneducated or unsophisticated."
8558641
maybe other story where the princesses (including Cadence, Twilight and Ember, maybe Skystar) will have their 'adventure' with Spike. But not Chrysallis
8558890
he'll gonna need it real bad
8558640
especially Big Mac, Rainbow Blitz and Hondo Flank
My prediction is either starlight, Trixie or ember will be next
8559824
Ember will be in but later. Not going to put Starlight. Still debating to put Trixie or not
8559831
Its up to you to put trixie in or not
On an unrelated note are you going to do any characters from the mlp movie?
8559833
Well, I do plan to make Equestria Girl version of MLP movie. Just need more ideas on it
8559857
Im talking about in this story not trying to sound rude
8559859
No. I dont think so.
8559869
Ok
8554760
I don't think he understood what was happening... Anyways, thank you, and with any luck you'll have something more to read soon enough
8560038
Welcome. Still need to think of moon dancer's chapter
8560052
This is proving my point. I'm not thanking you, nor was Belifurn referring to you when he/she said they remembered and use to read all of the person their comment was directed to's stuff (which by the way is me). You really need to learn how to use this site, but, considering you're still stuck on THE CAPS BUTTON, I don't see that happening.
8560891
Each of us has our own way of writing stories. You may like writing sceneric stuff first but I prefer straight to the story.
8560891
And what's wrong using caps ?
8561084
Beside the fact it makes you look like you don't know how to turn the caps lock off? Or know even the basics of grammar? It looks bad. You think scenery and plot aren't a necessary part of a story. You rushed everything and you have tons of people commenting as such but you'd rather ignore people who are telling you whats wrong and needs fixed to help your story and you improve as an author for the "MOAR!"s. You're not going to improve because you don't really want too. You ignore good advice and make excuses for why its not for you. "English is my second language." If I wanted something I wrote to be in... say, French I'd get a native French person who excels in English to go over it and tell me what should be where and how this should be this way so that it makes sense when written. You ignore basic rules of writing like describing your characters appearance and what they're doing because you "want to get to the story." if I asked you to show one published book that follows your "type of story" I'd bet heavily you couldn't.
I tried to help, least no one can accuse me otherwise.
8561861
I can understand the grammar part but CAPSLOCK? Every writers has their own writing style. Some like likes to put scenery first before the story. Some like to put both scenery and some unrelated things before the story. A few just like me, went straight to the story. About capslock title, I follow the great writers such as Steven Spielberg and George Lucas.
I don't mind you critics the story because I welcome it but I do mind if you critics my writing style and expect to follow and copy your writing style. Yes, English is my second language but that doesn't mean the first language user is perfect in speaking English that they can criticize the Second Language User and Third Language User. Like I said, I appreciate about your critics about grammar but not about my writing style.
Spielberg doesn't do that, he uses a large font on Movie Posters just as George Lucas doesn't do that. STAR WARS Isn't written like that it's written Star Wars. Typography is a style of art commonly used on movie posters to create an appealing and eye catching effect. They don't just cap lock everything they put it in a specific location at specific angles in specific ways to create an effect. The same is true of book covers. However find one time where Lucas writes STAR WARS in his autobiography or anywhere else for that matter in caps. I think it's equally funny you took two men who excel at scenery as your great writers you follow. Equally true, I don't care if you read what I write, I said any of the writers on here who are doing great. Even funnier perhaps, anyone whose read my work, knows my strength and what people tend to like the most in my writing is characterization not scenery. You're trying to say that you can skip entire areas of writing because its your style. Oh, and one of my stories has an entire chapter in utter darkness and is nothing but internal dialogue. It works fantastically for a hook because it creates a interesting situation that readers are interested to find out whats happening, jumping around at light speed does not. Style is something that improves and grows with experience for any author wanting to get better. You are using it as an excuse to justify short comings.
This was clearly a waste of time and effort on my part to try and help you be a better author not just an "okay" one. There are people who will actually use the help and critic to improve beyond knowing their grammar has major issues and having it pointed out. I look forward to helping them.
8599980
no, it shouldn't
8600489
what do you mean?
8628620
"He's not ignorant. Just doesn't have knowledge."
that's literally what ignorant means: "ig·no·rant /ˈiɡnərənt/ adjective: lacking knowledge or awareness in general, or about something in particular; uneducated or unsophisticated."
This was q sweet chapter, that makes all seven I wonder who next. I hope Smolder joins one day