When going to PAX I expect and prepare for everything logically possible. Too bad that getting thrown into a world with pastel ponies fighting against the force of Hell wasn’t on the list to prepare for. That was three thousand years ago...
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Is this a Displaced story?
Nice
Alright, first off: there are numerous mistakes in just your story summary. Not exactly a promising start.
"... against the force of hell..." forces. Because a singular force of hell would be pathetic and kinda funny.
"... return of there king and an army if immortal warriors..." there should be their because we're talking about a person and not a place. if should be of.
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This question has been asked before and the only answer I have is I really don't know any more. The term displaced stands for dimensional displaced and in a literal sense you could say it is as Aion is not technically from this world but a displaced human from earth. But on a broader scope since he had a literal hand in shaping the world and that's why I don't really know.
I guess it's up to your definition of what a displaced is.
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Wondered how long someone would notice the 'force of Hell' thing, there is a reason for that that will be later explained.
Also thanks for catching the the there/their thing . They're really my only weakness when it comes to writing. If you see any other ones let me know.
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I understand that you probably didnt know a specific year set but just thought it would be clearer if used a character that is not quantifiable like or the word many instead of infinity which can be used as a quantity
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You may be right. I'll try to add something, what it will be I don't know.
Please see my blog for a better update scheduled and some important information.
W. D. Arceaion
Stunning picture
That armor is badass as fuck
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Whoever your editor is right now needs to go through the chapters again, i still see fucked up grammer/missing words.