How much of a build-up are you going to do before you actually get to the story it was good but still

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I guess this much can be said.
My plan is to do an interlude for all the Main 6 and by that time I should be at some point that is actually in the show. (Probably right before the founding of Equestria.) After all at the present the story is set at the Beginning and I do mean The Beginning (Time doesn't even exist yet). But if it's action you want then don't worry there will be plenty of action. including the next chapter. Unfortunately I had to put in this chapter for world building and future purposes.

W. D. Arceaion

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thanks I just wanted to make sure that this doesn't turn into 20 chapters of nothing seen plenty of stories like that and then when the story actually start it is crap good luck see you next chapter

This is a very great story, keep it up.
P.s I love it.

MMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRREEEEEEEEEE!!!! BEFORE I SICK YUNO GASAI ON YOUR ASS!!!

How was this featured? Actually though, how? While the concept is good, the execution is sloppy at best, the spelling is seriously out of whack, the pacing is confusing, and the chapters are miniscule. I honestly have no idea how people are this enthused by this fic.

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I have no idea. No seriously, I have no idea! In all honesty I was expecting people to tell me the story was shit but people actually like it. Now I'm not complaining but I know the story is far from good and the fact that so many people like it amazes me to no end.

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The story is good. So good infact that we are able to 'appreciate the forest instead of criticizing the trees' so to speak.

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My reading skills extend to being able to ignore bad grammer un less the grammer is backwards like, I liek good food I can read that, however I like food good, my mind locks onto that but I can turn this skill "on and off" so to speak. I ramble a bit too. *sorrynotsorry*
Fuck you too spellcheck!!!!

After he finally got control of his laughter he slowly sat down and gestured for her to do the same. "Beskar, is a legendary metal, but it does have another name. It's known as the Immortals Bane for being the only thing to ever have been able to kill an Immortal. Even the tiniest cut from this metal leaves an immortal screaming in pain and depleted of any and all magic. The only good thing about it is that it can't be forged and its one if the rarest metals in the universe.

And I made similiar from the esence of the Chara real knive when Chara Eradicated her universe as basic relative level .

Because having this super rubber if anything binding to the reality is cut down merory could restore the scraches like the pices which were deleted by the rubber into the creator part .

And is te choise .

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