When going to PAX I expect and prepare for everything logically possible. Too bad that getting thrown into a world with pastel ponies fighting against the force of Hell wasn’t on the list to prepare for. That was three thousand years ago...
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I know him from somewhere...
Him at the end in your notes, I'll think ofbit eventually.
Nice can't wait for the next chapter
I take it that's meant to be want?
8954373 it's from class of titans
Great work can't wait for the next chapter
8954666
Fixed, thanks for noticing. Editing after working all night to finish the chapter was not my best idea.
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Wondered if some one would notice. Anyway yes this is what Chronos will look like grown up. Why this Chronos? Because this Chronos is the best Chronos aside from the original in Greek myths.
The boy yawned and slowly opened >her<= his eyes
8957072
? ...Huh.
Ok well it's fixed but why did I put that?
Ok i am going to br honest here i think you did this story wrong you hook us in with twilight wanting answers and the shove that plot to the back in order to have the bulk of you fic be back story and only bring the main plot up for interludes and for me that just is very annoying if you want to have the back story be the main focus of you story then my suggestion is make two stories one with the back story and one foused on twilight and company
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I was originally going to have the story set in the past and work my way to the present but one of the moderators suggested I do it this way and the next time I attempted to get it published it was accepted. I really don't like this back and forth either but I'm doing the best I can with what I was given to work with. If I was to do it again I would have stuck with my original attempted but in the words of Tomska:
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8972669 ok here is another suggestion if you can make the interludes more frequent and longer or you chould add the longer present half of the story into normal chapters that you have both past and present in one go
8972898
I plan to do something like that. Right now we're in the world building phase but eventually you will start to see the two stories over lap. I have a plan but to see it your going to have to sit back, relax and enjoy the show. If your willing to stay I welcome you along for the ride.
What language do you base he names off of? I now chronos is time in Latin but I can't find the other two words used.
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If I remember correctly it was Greek. However I don't rightly remember, Most of the names however will be Latin or Greek in origin. I do know that one of the names was taken from an obscure reference to Zeus's twin brother.
Barely start reading this today and I find kronos from "Class of the Titans"....
Wow... awesome story and that... now I'm definitely gonna keep an eye on this.