When going to PAX I expect and prepare for everything logically possible. Too bad that getting thrown into a world with pastel ponies fighting against the force of Hell wasn’t on the list to prepare for. That was three thousand years ago...
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good.
I like the story so far but you need to work on your writing because some of the names are kind of hard to read or should I say understand but it's always good I like to see the next chapter.
8903484
The Names are actually Latin and Greek. They're the names of the actual Primordial Deities taken from the Orphic tradition and the The Iliad. so I can't change them there is a reason that the names are as they are.
∞ years later
When is this are they just hanging out in the time stream
8906526
I could never find the actual date in the show, but if someone finds it then please tell me so I can fix this.
W. D. Arceaion
Why would anyone carry around ten G's in cash on the first day of a con?
8937385
He didn't want to go in the first place so he brought a shit tone of money and said fuck it. However he may have purposefully done it, expected to run into the Merchant. Unfortunately Aion's memories are so damaged that he remembers little of his life as a human so the answer will never truly be known
This chapter was painful. But, I've heard many good things about the story as a whole, so I'll try to overlook it.
9001925
This is my first story and this was my first attempted at writing. I am both proud and vary disappointed in myself with this chapter. I honestly have no idea how it was accepted. one day I will rewrite this chapter but for now I will work on the actual story and try to be better. Thank you for giving it a chance.
God damn it John Mulaney. Love that comedian.
9001936
Hey, you did better than me......
When the second word is a typo, my hopes for having an easy read were thrown out the window. I’m hoping the grammar will get better but I’m not holding my breath. But I’ll give this story a chance so long as it doesn’t become so distracting that I feel the story just isn’t worth the effort.
coddle