KO awesome chapter, man both brothers have gain led themselves girlfriends on their first day which would make like Epic Crazy Awesome! I wonder who will be the next girls they’ll have fun with?
Like everyone has said, great job dude. More than exceeded my expectations. And I consider this a nice little preview to the waifu story you'll write involving the Dazzlings. Can't wait for the next chapter, and very curious on who's next. Personally, I hope you have one of the ShadowBolts having a turn soon. I've said this before in the past, but there isn't nearly enough good clop of them. -Dark
Adagio and Aria moaned intensely from the pleasure and sprayed their love nectars on yours and Spike's cock before collapsing onto you and your bother, still feeling their wombs being filled up.
Excellent work dude! Can’t wait for the next chapter
Nicely done!
KO awesome chapter, man both brothers have gain led themselves girlfriends on their first day which would make like Epic Crazy Awesome! I wonder who will be the next girls they’ll have fun with?
Wow!!! Didn't see that coming!!
Not bad.
The bros minds are blown because of the mention of a sister!
Pretty awesome chapter. Can't wait for the next one!!
i am so proud of this fic right bow
Like everyone has said, great job dude. More than exceeded my expectations. And I consider this a nice little preview to the waifu story you'll write involving the Dazzlings. Can't wait for the next chapter, and very curious on who's next. Personally, I hope you have one of the ShadowBolts having a turn soon. I've said this before in the past, but there isn't nearly enough good clop of them.
-Dark
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I've got an idea
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Oh?
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Yup, I just posted it in my latest blog
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Just saw it and wrote my opinion
Adagio and Aria moaned intensely from the pleasure and sprayed their love nectars on yours and Spike's cock before collapsing onto you and your bother, still feeling their wombs being filled up.
Did you mean Sonata instead of Aria?
But all in all great story so far.
I sense a threesome in the works.
I like your use of Spike saying, "SPIKE...WANT!" That's a very nice touch, dude!
The only kind of error i really noticed was minor misspelled words here and there. Other than that, well done
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thank you
I want more chapters NOW!!!
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patience
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Please tell me you're going to finish this
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I am
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HOORAY!!!