10126257 Why do you think he begged for it to be a nightmare? Because she never abused him. PTSD can twist anyone's mind around. I speak from experience
How;s it going brother, you might want to delete twilight part of wanting to hurt spike as well unless you want someone else to say it. Buy nice on continuing this
Wait....that doesn't make sense. Twilight sent him to the other equestria to save him but she also abused him? That doesnt add up
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Why do you think he begged for it to be a nightmare? Because she never abused him. PTSD can twist anyone's mind around. I speak from experience
How;s it going brother, you might want to delete twilight part of wanting to hurt spike as well unless you want someone else to say it. Buy nice on continuing this
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There, instead of deleting it I changed the name
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Were you intending it to be twilight or was it a mistake?
Seemed like there was a twist for a moment.
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I think I meant for it to be Celestia. I was writing that part at 3 am
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OK
Don't overdo it man. And thank you for continuing this. Drink some green tea as you write. It really helps.
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No problem. And I'll probably drink some herbal mint tea
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alright just helping out, also i made my own story dont know if you read but give it a read and tell me what you think.
Glad to see you're back.
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I've been focusing on "A Dragon's Heart" until now
There are certainly worse fates that could happen to someone...
Wow, that was an powerful flashback.
Hopefully he will eventually manage to move on from them.
Nice to see an update for this story!
Had been a while, and I have to admit I already thought you had moved to other things.
Seems I was wrong.
Maybe consider marking the flashback somehow? Like making it italic?
Some readers might not notice it and get confused.