"That's okay, I know what it's like to have an annoying little girl running around, always getting into your stuff, crampin your style, drivin away the babes, always lookin happy to see you...." He stares far away into the distance for a moment.
Oh god, what was her name... the little girl-scout.
"Okay Anon, first of all, and this only extends to when you're being taught so I'm able to concentrate, for the love of all that is holy please do not restrain yourself outside of class time... But, no posing or taking off articles of clothing okay?" I saw nothing. Nothing!
You know she brings up a good point. While he is a moron and vain Johnny is pretty talented, attractive , and over all a decent person. Also it was nice to see him missing Suzy, she might be a manipulative little leech at times but was one of the few people that actually liked Johnny.
I think you could have put a little less emphasis on the social views, which is strange for me because I usually find those parts so intriguing. I, as I imagine everyone else reading this story, want the focus to be exclusively on Johnny being Johnny and mares dropping their figurative panties all around him. I never really liked the character before, but I love the exploration of the guy's good traits without making significant changes to said character.
"Great then! So today, we'll be talking about the beginning stage of a relationship, or courting, the most important thing for any species survival, and for more intelligent species, something that's desired for far more than just that."
I was partially expecting something like Randy from South Park explaining TMI... Just adjusted for mares.
Oh god, what was her name... the little girl-scout.
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Little Suzy (or simply known as just "Suzy")
"Okay Anon, first of all, and this only extends to when you're being taught so I'm able to concentrate, for the love of all that is holy please do not restrain yourself outside of class time... But, no posing or taking off articles of clothing okay?"
I saw nothing. Nothing!
Heehehehe, this is freaking awesome I love it, I love it!
Good show!
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Hey thanks a lot
I like this Johnny ^^
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Little Suzy
You know she brings up a good point. While he is a moron and vain Johnny is pretty talented, attractive , and over all a decent person. Also it was nice to see him missing Suzy, she might be a manipulative little leech at times but was one of the few people that actually liked Johnny.
reading this one part just made me think of this.
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After watching that if it wasn't intentional it's incredible how exact that was
I think you could have put a little less emphasis on the social views, which is strange for me because I usually find those parts so intriguing. I, as I imagine everyone else reading this story, want the focus to be exclusively on Johnny being Johnny and mares dropping their figurative panties all around him. I never really liked the character before, but I love the exploration of the guy's good traits without making significant changes to said character.
I was partially expecting something like Randy from South Park explaining TMI...
Just adjusted for mares.
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Y eso es sacado de Los Simpsons.