We open our mouths and sing! BRONYS ARENT JUST FOR GIRLS LET THIS TALE UNFURL TWILIGHT SPARKLE I HAD TOO MUCH TO DRINK!!!

Well I said bring it on and you definitely brought it like you always so well done .

Great ending and story. Who's next? Is it Octavia Melody

I can imagine you made a third chapter making Shining into Gleaming Shield his female version lol just saying bro

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No, I think I'll either work on Sunset Shimmer or Princess Ember next

Cool Dragon Lord Ember is my top favorite in season six characters

Not bad at all IsraelYabuki. Who will be next?

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I've decided to move onto Sunset Shimmer next, and then after that, when I've gotten 200 followers, I'll do an Anthro Waifu Special involving all the characters

8388757 Okay. What about one with Nightmare Moon? Just curious.

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I've taken care of the Luna/Nightmare Moon story already.
Here's the link: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/375681/a-moonlit-night-on-the-beach

8388764 I see it now. Will Sunset be human or anthro?

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Anthro, of course.

8388815 Yeah should've seen that coming XD. Can't wait to read it. And of course your next parts of the series.

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why thank you

8388818 You're welcome dude.

I'm normally not a fan of anthro stories, but here, it worked really well.

7.5 out of 10

"Not gay enough"- Me

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Sorry man, but I'm a straight writer. The guy and Shining Armor only show an interest in Cadence, not each other romantic-wise

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Don't worry, I was only joking .

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Oh XD, I didn't know that. Ya got me!

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Well if you ever decide to write a gay story,, feel free to ask me for help if you need it.

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I'll keep that in mind

Okay, Shining is a bit too chill about letting some other man have sex with his wife.

Also, how did he end up in equestria? So far as I know he’s the first human to not go there as a result of dying in the human world.

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Look, I'm gonna fix this one day, just give me some time

Cadence would always take you to the library inside her castle or at the local library in town to teach you about the history of the Crystal Empire. She and Shining even showed you this crystalized statue of this baby dragon named Spike holding the crystal heart. They explained how Spike helped Cadence and Shining save the empire from the tyrant, King Sombra. You laughed at how humiliating it must have been for the evil king to fall into the hands of a baby dragon.

Little random thing here, but I actually really like Sombra, I would really like to see a good reformation story with him....

Possibly throw a human into it for shits and giggles, but hey, it's up to you...

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I'm working on something similar to that. I've got a special surprise planned out for Sombra in my Wrath of Grogar story, but that's gonna wait until later on, have you read it?

Cadence's hair dangles over her face and brushed against your cheek. She moaned into the kiss the more she danced her tongue with yours. She then pulled away to get some air. She sat on her knees and removed her dress, leaving only her pink bra, panties and leggings. She blushed and gave you an embarrassed, yet aroused smile and you could feel your face blushing, too. Never in your wildest dreams back home have you ever encountered somepony so beautiful as Cadence.

For some reason, I'm imaging Shining Armor sinning Slow Dancing In The Dark while I read this...

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Not yet, but I will.

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If you haven't, you might wanna read Heirs of Grogar first.

Wrath of Grogar is the sequel

Reading that disturbed and aroused the shit out of me....

please send help.

Well she should've told Blade that he's now immortal and get to keep his youth like the other boys who got laid with an Alicorn.

Joder que gran historia

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Can't understand what you're saying

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I guess Niki means he loved it.