It's an alright fiction. I like how it have at least some character development on Cadence, but I just feel like Shinning Armor is a bit off just a little bit on character development. Now for Flurry Heart I'm not sure if she can talk, but I guess it's your character development on it. I have to say you did a great job on that so far.
8339870 I did a little research on my previous anthro waifu fictions in order to see how much time went by for all of the characters I wrote about and so far, Flurry Heart is currently able to speak. Also, thanks for telling me about that flaw about Shining, I'll make sure to get his character right in the next chapter.
Good start apparently for me I have to rewrite my stories. Yesterday I finished remaking Yandere Ponies x Male Reader starting with Yandere Princess Cadence x human Male Reader. If you don't what Yandere means do you well here's the definition is a Japanese term for a person who is initially very loving and gentle to someone (or at least innocent) before their devotion becomes destructive in nature, often through violence and/or brutality.
A few hours later, you heard a knock on your door. You told whoever it was they could come in. You looked and the the door open up by Flurry Heart. She flies over to you with her big wings and sits on your bed, looking at you with her adorable little smile.
"Well, thanks for telling me about it. See you later." Flurry Heart then walks out of the room and closes the door on the way out and you waved at her.
"Come on, now. Breakfast is ready." Cadence says, patting the seat on her right. You nodded and walked over, taking your seat next to her. You kept your eyes locked on your food. You could still feel your face flushed, but you tried to ignore it and began to eat your food. You were unaware of Cadence looking directly at you as she was eating her breakfast. You took your time to eat as always. But then, Cadence spoke again, catching you off guard and almost choked on your food. "Why so nervous?"
It's an alright fiction. I like how it have at least some character development on Cadence, but I just feel like Shinning Armor is a bit off just a little bit on character development. Now for Flurry Heart I'm not sure if she can talk, but I guess it's your character development on it. I have to say you did a great job on that so far.
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I did a little research on my previous anthro waifu fictions in order to see how much time went by for all of the characters I wrote about and so far, Flurry Heart is currently able to speak. Also, thanks for telling me about that flaw about Shining, I'll make sure to get his character right in the next chapter.
I like it, Would read more.
Good start apparently for me I have to rewrite my stories. Yesterday I finished remaking Yandere Ponies x Male Reader starting with Yandere Princess Cadence x human Male Reader. If you don't what Yandere means do you well here's the definition is a Japanese term for a person who is initially very loving and gentle to someone (or at least innocent) before their devotion becomes destructive in nature, often through violence and/or brutality.
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I actually know what a yandere is, but maybe when I'm not busy, I'll check out some of your stories.
Except its on wattpad
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oh
Yeah
Oh god, I just realized that the title was pun.
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I like puns!
YO I FUCKING SWEAR-
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Oh, never mind.
Why so serious lol
Okay, I did not take Shining Armor for the type of guy to promote the "My Wife's Boyfriend" meme.
But in all seriousness, good chapter, despite the joke I made earlier, I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work.