Dreams are a strange quirk of peoples lives. Many such people can say they're a gateway into another world. Those thoughts are true for me in this world called Equestria. I wonder how much of this life is real. Or is it all just Fantasy?
On a side note, I am partly thinking about removing the bathroom seen and the sex tag from the story. I'm unsure if I feel like having that in the book itself, since, after all is said and done with the entire thing.
It's a possibility I may find a way to turn this bugger into a hard cover book much later down the line. So keeping it pg13/R rather then xxx, strictly speaking, would help that fact if I did go that path.[< low chance of that, but it's still a possible outcome]
10832262 I thought your story was nice as it is honestly, the bathroom part was enjoyable and a little hot. For the life of me I keep thinking you've changed the story since I read it back in 2017.
10836171 I'll admit to the original storyline being changed here and there. Mostly to keep the character in more understandable situations. There's some interesting things planned out for chapter 6, though I have yet to get started writing it just yet.
Basic instinct and tutelage in the ways of spell making is something Unicorns, as well as the other races in some cases, look to their elders, friends and family and fellow strangers even. This is also why many schools such as Canterlots School of the Gifted are often so sought after by everypony. Tutelage is often needed for many Unicorn fillies and colts to even be able to channel their magic through their horn, as they can not physically see what they are trying to do. And, as they grow older, their wisdom into magic grows with their skill set and growth into earning their very cutie mark. Which, more often than not, is usually tied to some form of the magic they learned growing up.
Real talk? The first thing I think they should do is work on their "inner sight" so they would at least be able to tell where they stand magically and physically.
10844747 Not entirely wrong there. But I don't figure many young fillies or colts to sit around long enough to do some metaphysical energy searching.
I mainly wrote it like that after thinking about how much trouble Sweetiebelle had with her magic. Barely able to move anything and more half the time she couldn't even get it to light. So thinking about how younger kids would treat their magic it just made more sense that the writer of that book would say guidance is more a key factor then simple self searching.
And while this does poke a slight hole into Wispy learning how to use their magic so quickly,. They're not the same age as the fillies and colts around them. So they learn how to use it faster as they were mentally older. And while they may have not experienced magic itself as a human [being earth doesn't have magic as far as we are aware], in dreams we often find ourselves doing things we ordinarily wouldn't be able to do, so her thinking she was dreaming at the time played into her ability to learn quickly.
...Though, I admit to not thinking about that at the time of writing. But at least the above should help it make more sense from the readers standpoint.
A wild chapter five appears~! All written in one sitting even ^^
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Nice
Waiting for more.
Excellent chapter can’t wait for the next one.
the box test was super interesting g as well as the surprise from Princess Luna
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I use read! It is super effective!
Love the chapter!
And after a quick proofing, any small errors have now been fixed~![:rainbowkiss:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowkiss.png)
On a side note, I am partly thinking about removing the bathroom seen and the sex tag from the story. I'm unsure if I feel like having that in the book itself, since, after all is said and done with the entire thing.
It's a possibility I may find a way to turn this bugger into a hard cover book much later down the line. So keeping it pg13/R rather then xxx, strictly speaking, would help that fact if I did go that path.[< low chance of that, but it's still a possible outcome]
good job wrighting this chapter keep upp the good work
10832262
I thought your story was nice as it is honestly, the bathroom part was enjoyable and a little hot.
For the life of me I keep thinking you've changed the story since I read it back in 2017.
10836171
I'll admit to the original storyline being changed here and there. Mostly to keep the character in more understandable situations. There's some interesting things planned out for chapter 6, though I have yet to get started writing it just yet.
Real talk? The first thing I think they should do is work on their "inner sight" so they would at least be able to tell where they stand magically and physically.
10844747
Not entirely wrong there. But I don't figure many young fillies or colts to sit around long enough to do some metaphysical energy searching.
I mainly wrote it like that after thinking about how much trouble Sweetiebelle had with her magic. Barely able to move anything and more half the time she couldn't even get it to light. So thinking about how younger kids would treat their magic it just made more sense that the writer of that book would say guidance is more a key factor then simple self searching.
And while this does poke a slight hole into Wispy learning how to use their magic so quickly,. They're not the same age as the fillies and colts around them. So they learn how to use it faster as they were mentally older. And while they may have not experienced magic itself as a human [being earth doesn't have magic as far as we are aware], in dreams we often find ourselves doing things we ordinarily wouldn't be able to do, so her thinking she was dreaming at the time played into her ability to learn quickly.
...Though, I admit to not thinking about that at the time of writing. But at least the above should help it make more sense from the readers standpoint.
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I'm just saying. The first thing you should do is cover the fundamentals.
nice keep up the good work![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
I love it so far keep up the amazing work!
Sorry to you guys that I don't update the chapters very often. I have a bad tendency to get easily distracted by other things going on.
On the bright side; story nearly has 100 thumbs up~. Nice record~
This story has a good flow to it, and the premise is vary interesting. I can't wait to read more.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)