Since his greed accident, Spike feared to lose his friendship with the ponies he loved, but a mirror will only show the truth. A truth that force him to change, to grow, and to rule.
Grammar
a lot of grammar issues indeed.
The story seems interesting thou. Maybe you could search for an editor
(and use grammarly, it will be really usefull while you are getting the hang on writting)
8504563Ok, thanks for commenting.
Couldn't he have talked this out with Twilight rather than abandoning her? That isn't right, after everything.
Grammar
a lot of grammar issues indeed.
The story seems interesting thou. Maybe you could search for an editor
(and use grammarly, it will be really usefull while you are getting the hang on writting)
8504563
Ok, thanks for commenting.
Couldn't he have talked this out with Twilight rather than abandoning her? That isn't right, after everything.