Since his greed accident, Spike feared to lose his friendship with the ponies he loved, but a mirror will only show the truth. A truth that force him to change, to grow, and to rule.
Great chapter… but it might need a little editing, flow seems a little strange near the end. Maybe a scene when spike first arrives and recognizes the kreelex?
Great chapter… but it might need a little editing, flow seems a little strange near the end. Maybe a scene when spike first arrives and recognizes the kreelex?
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Ok, thanks for commenting.
Any progress with the next chapter
Update?
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Next chapter is coming soon. Sorry for the huge Delay