• Published 26th Jun 2017
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forgiveness - MidnightShy21



When her friends prank her, Rainbow Dash runs away. While she's gone she talks to a friend. Her friends are worried sick about her.

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Chapter 1

"We are sorry rainbow dash, but we did it because you wouldn't stop bragging about your hero deeds, I hope you can forgive us...." Fluttershy said in a sad tone.

"I can forgive you but..... Promise me you won't do something like this ever again" Rainbow dash said.

Twilight immediately said: "We promise we won't ever do it again, right girls?" She said looking at them when she said the last part. They all nodded. Rainbow dash walked over and they did a group hug.

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a few years later...

"No! Stop! I'm so sorry...." Rainbow dash said, tears welling up in her eyes. I killed them... I killed them all... This is all my fault! If i wouldn't have done the cookie prank, none of this would have happened! she thought. She was crying. She started to think about everything that has happened these last few days. They wanted me to stop! But i didn't listen... I... I killed everyone! I killed them! She started to breath heavily. She couldn't take it anymore. She just wanted it to be over. The "zombie" ponies were really close to her now. They all opened their mouth.

"IT'S A PRANK!!!" They all yelled and some of them started laughing, others were giggling. There were a few ponies that felt guilty. Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, Applejack and Mrs Cake. Rainbow looked at them in shock.

"This is all a prank?!" She yelled. She felt more tears coming.

"You wouldn't stop pranking us, so we decided to prank you ourself!" Twilight said happily.

"Y... You..." Rainbow dash said before flying away as fast as she could. When she got home she packed some stuff and tank. She flew out of town. She didn't care where she would go, as long as it was away from the place she called home. After about an hour of flying she flew down to a cloud and started to cry again. I'm such a crybaby right now... she thought.

"Are you okay?" She heard a voice say. The voice sounded familiar to her. She wiped her tears away the best she could. She turned around and looked at the presence behind her. Soarin... When he saw her he asked her: "What's wrong Dash?" He sounded really concerned.

"N- nothing" she said.

"Dash, i know something is wrong, you wouldn't just cry about nothing, at least the dash I know wouldn't" he said sternly.

"W-well... Uh... M-my friends..." She said.

"What about your friends?" He asked.

"They... They..." She said.

"You don't have to tell it if you don't want to" he said with a reassuring smile. She smiled back weakly.

"Where were you going?" He asked after a few minutes.

"Uhm... Anywhere that is not ponyville" she said.

"You wanna come with me?" He asked. She nodded.


45 minutes later

"Where are we going?" Dash asked.

"You'll see" he replied. A few minutes later he said: "Close your eyes".

"I can't fly if i close my eyes" She said.

"You have to trust me" he said. She nodded. He flew closer to her and she closed her eyes. She felt a hoof wrap around hers.

"Where are we?" She asked.

"Shhh quiet" he put his other hoof on her mouth and flew further.

A few moments later she heard Soarin talking to somepony. "She is with me" she heard Soarin say. "Alright, come on in" the other pony said. She heard hoofsteps coming closer to her. "Come on" Soarin said. She felt a hoof wrap around hers again. He pulled her with him. She heard a door open.

"Alright, you can open your eyes, your tortoise already flew in" he said, laughing a little at the last part. She opened her eyes.

"Is this the wonderbolt headquarters?!" She asked with wide eyes. Soarin nodded. "OMYGOSHOMYGOSHOMYGOSH! I can't believe you took me here!!" She yelled.

"Hey, no problem, I thought you would like it" he said.

"Thank you so much!" She said and hugged him tightly. He hugged back.

"Hey Soarin!" Spitfire yelled. Immediately Soarin and Dash stopped hugging. "You remember that rainbow maned mare? She is missing!" She yelled, running up to him.

"Spitfire, calm down!" Soarin said.

"Why?" She asked. Soarin stepped aside a little so that Spitfire would see Dash.

"What is she doing here?! *gasp* :pinkiegasp:Did you kidnap her?!" Spitfire asked shocked. Dash giggled.

"No of coarse I didn't kidnap her! I found her outside a few miles away and decided to bring her here," he explained.

"Why was she out there all alone?" Spitfire asked.

Soarin looked at Dash. He saw that her smile faded. "Uh... She was uh... Practicing! Yeah practicing...." He said.

"Yeah sure...." Spitfire said. "Well i have to go now, see ya!" She said and walked away. Rainbow sighed.

"Come with me" Soarin said.


few minutes later

"I have to practice right now, if you want to you can watch!" Soarin said. Dash nodded. She watched him fly away to the other bolts. She saw Spitfire give them a speech. After that they started practice. She saw them do loops and all types of tricks. She was really impressed.

After practice Soarin flew over to her. "You ready to go?" He asked.

"Where?" She asked.

"I thought it would be best if we went to my house, since you can't stay here...." He said.

"Okay! Lead the way!" She said.

They flew to Soarin's house. "Why did I have to be quiet before?" Dash asked him.

"I needed to get past all of the wonderbolt fans without being seen" he explained.

"Ohh" she replied.

"Wait where is tank?!" Rainbow said as she started to freak out.

"Your tortoise? He is flying right above you" he said. Dash looked up.

"Oh thank goodness!" she said.

"What happened before?" He asked.

"What do you mean?" She asked.

"With your friends" he said.

"Uh they..." She started to say, but stopped herself.

"I shouldn't have asked" he said.

"No it's fine, I can tell you...."
































































You thought it continued didn't you?

Author's Note:

BAM! First chapter done!
Tell me if it is bad.
:pinkiehappy:
Please let me know if you find grammar mistakes.