He was just a driver that promised to take his friends to that convention and while he waited he decided to buy something for his ever growing collection. Then the Merchant displaced him but something caught him before he arrived at his destination.
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Well....it's been awhile since there's an update to this story. Surprised that it was clop, but I can appreciate.
9081964
Kinda had writer's block and wrote this, decided to see what the reaction would be. So, what do you think?
good job
9082096
Faust: tia, Luna meet your new father
tia and Luna:
Say what now?
The Monk
It took me a minute. Drop the word "with" and it makes sense. As is and without commas, this is a bit of a brain twister.
9082618
I meaning to write "room he would share with Faust", my bad.
While I'm enjoying the story itself, the flow leaves a fair bit to be desired. This chapter particularly has no small amount. For example
That seems choppy to me in how it's arranged. I would suggest getting a pre-reader personally, but regardless the story itself is still quite interesting and I plan to keep an eye on it.
9091913
This is a side-chapter, it isn't part of the main story and can be shipped if you want. Also, about the flow, sorry I do all the editing and proofreading by myself and because it is just a hobby and my schedule is very inconsistent, but thanks for the advice/criticism.