Fall of Harmony

by Moon-Lite

Inner Workings: Fall of Harmony Timeline

Author's Note:

Hi All!
Like I mentioned before, the main story for this arc may be complete, but I still have some fun little one-shot's to put out, as well as some little bits of info for those who are interested, such as this!

I do my best not to mention the date of when the stories are, trying to leave vague mentioning of the time though some are obvious, such as Cacophony of Emotion happening at Christmas, and Week of Comradery occuring over what seems like the span of a single week.

I decided to put his up so that people who are interested can put an actual finger to how the story progresses~

I also have decided not to hide the titles of the four One-Shot's I have planned, figuring that it may help cause some speculation on what is suppossed to occur in them ;'D

I will slowly put out the remaining short chapters, and plan to start the Friendship Games arc towards the end of the month, though releases for it will be slower than with Fall of Harmony so as to preserve my poor fingers xD

I will leave one last small bit of info~

Rot thirteen

Friday, December 18th - Fall of Harmony: Fall from Grace
Saturday, December 19th - Fall of Harmony: From the Ashes
Monday, December 21st - Fall of Harmony: Under Warm Covers
Tuesday, December 22nd - Fall of Harmony: Desire for Absolution
Thursday, December 24th - Fall of Harmony: Cacophony of Emotion
Friday, December 25th - Fall of Harmony: Cacophony of Emotion
Monday, January 4th - Fall of Harmony: The New Girl

- Fall of Harmony: Hazy School Day

- CHS: Revelations of Innocence

- Fall of Harmony: Interactions of Opposites
Tuesday, January 5th - Fall of Harmony: From the Fall
Thursday, January 7th - CHS: No More Hiding
Friday, January 8th - Fall of Harmony: Overflow of Truth
Saturday, January 9th - CHS: Opinions of Restoration
Sunday, January 10th - Fall of Harmony: Out with Friends
Monday, January 11th - Fall of Harmony: Week of Comradery
Tuesday, January 12th - Fall of Harmony: Week of Comradery
Wednesday, January 13th - Fall of Harmony: Week of Comradery
Thursday, January 14th - Fall of Harmony: Week of Comradery
Friday, January 15th - Fall of Harmony: Week of Comradery
Saturday, January 16th - Equestria: The Prodigal Daughter
Sunday, January 17th - CHS: Reconvening the Orchestra
Saturday, January 30th - Fall of Harmony: Week of Comradery
Sunday, January 31st - Equestria: Time Heals All

Gur Sevraqfuvc Gentrql

Comments

[everydaygamer]

I would say I liked this story though there are some things I didn't like. I didn't like how Celestia was portrayed in this story, it just made no sense and didn't seem very realistic I mean the idea that everyone in the School was against Sunset seemed ridiculous, most stories balance this out by showing that at least the staff know better. Sure towards the end there's hints that a few students didn't think she was Anon-a-miss but for the most part all of CHS is portrayed as the villains in this story. Basically instead of a complex story we got a straight forward good vs evil kind of story. I also would have preferred some kind of resolution between Sunset and her CHS friends instead of her just running away.

So overall I thought it was pretty good if not a little simple for my taste since I feel like the premise of Anon-a-miss leaves room for more complex story telling than what we got here. I look forward to the upcoming one-shots.

[Moon-Lite]

8237091
Thanks for the constructive criticism~! ^^

I did have to portray Principal Celestia and Vice Principal Luna quite out of character, mainly for helping move the plot along in the way I wanted. I wanted Sunset to feel betrayed by those with a higher power than her as the final nail in the coffin for her returning to CHS, so thusly did Celestia and Luna react so absurdly towards her.

As this story is entirely based on Sunset's perspective, the entirety of CHS is thought of as her assailents, though it will be revealed in one of the upcoming one-shot's that not everyone was against her.

I didn't want to resolve the issues between Sunset and the Rainbooms that quickly, as to me it would feel cheap. One of the one-shot's is going to focus on them, and how they plan to try and apologize to Sunset. In addition, they are going to play major parts in the Friendship Games arc.

Im glad that you are still interested in it though~! ^^

[Rixec]

Very intriguing to put a date to everything and the names of the one-shots have me interested to see how they go. Looking forward to seeing ow they play out. ^_^

[everydaygamer]

8237172
Well when I said resolution I meant more like a conversation that didn't revolve around 1 side yelling and the other side running away. Don't have to have everything completely solved in one conversation and it would be less interesting if it was. Heck wouldn't have even had to be the whole group could have just been a one on one talk between Sunset and one of the other five or maybe someone talking to them on Sunsets behalf, something to give us an idea of where everyone currently stands at the end. Something to offer closure I guess until the next time. Just not a fan of things being left up in the air like that but that's just me.

[Moon-Lite]

8237328
Understandable~ ^^

I didn't have as much time to flesh them out as I wanted, since I needed Sunset's story to stay on pace~
Plus with such a radical change to them I can understand where they come off as more of an OC~

[Moon-Lite]

8237329

Ah, well I had planned a proper resolution, but then the story became well liked and I planned out a bunch of different story arcs ^^;

As far as Sunset's reactions, she was thorougly betrayed by the Rainbooms, and they were the final straw to driving her to suicide, so she would be hesitant to face them, and when they show up suddenly they are still attacking her.

That's part of why she snapped at the assembly. Her nerves where high enough because of how much she didnt want to even be there, then to hear the weak reason as to why her life had been hell blew her out of control. She unleasehd upon the Rainbooms because they were the the ones who drew her attention, and all the anger, sorrow, and dissapointment came out in an explosion of fury. She eventually realized she was doing exactly what caused this in the first place, but ahd to let those five know how bad she was hurt by them.

She left with Twilight, mainly cause Twilight was more or less carrying her out, albeit she was just holding Susnet close as she walked out.

There will be a resolution, and a lot of it comes into play in the next arc~

[andres_arg]

It seems to me that I fail you to include these 2 chapters

Saturday, January 16th - Equestria: The Prodigal Daughter
Sunday, January 17th - CHS: Reconvening the Orchestra

[Moon-Lite]

8237732
THose are 2 of the 4 one-shot's that I have yet to write.

They are going to be short, up to 2000 word chapters that just show little interactions or side stories and such~ ^^

[Moon-Lite]

8238204
Glad you like the story~ ^^

[Golden Fang Ryu Shenron]

For a second there, I thought that looked like a series.