Curious about the equine beasts Twilight Sparkle spoke of, Princess Luna sneaks into the human world in her pony form. She finds the nearest farm, hoping to get a glimpse of the rumored "horses". She gets much more than she bargained for.
It's not often that someone else's clopfic actually makes me jealous! But this one has... Now I want to write a story like this one. But mine would be an unworthy copy, a pale shadow of this greatness.
Very good. You got the feral nature down extremely well and even how Luna kind of got into the feral mindset herself at the end. That young stallion truly acted like a young stallion would and the alpha like an actual alpha.
ArmadilloEater: what exactly was the deal with Luna's magic? When she tried to resist the horses' advances, her magic failed. But then, after they had pounded the hell out of her, and that one young stallion needed help, her magic worked perfectly. I had though that maybe alicorn magic doesn't really work in the human world, but again, her magic helped that young stallion without fail. Also, there are the events of later chapters (I'm posting this in the chapter 1 comments section, and I don't want to spoil latter chapters for future readers), where magic seems to work just fine. Could it be that her magic did not succeed because she did not 100% wish for it to succeed?
8648082 My thinking is that her magic failed either because she subconsciously wanted it to, or because her heat was keeping her from focusing well enough to cast it.
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8013385 God, that's good. I'm totally saving that.
And that's how the saddle Arabians were originally made
*Alpha
*taper
*impatient
God, this is good..
It's not often that someone else's clopfic actually makes me jealous!
But this one has... Now I want to write a story like this one. But mine would be an unworthy copy, a pale shadow of this greatness.
You done good!
Very good. You got the feral nature down extremely well and even how Luna kind of got into the feral mindset herself at the end. That young stallion truly acted like a young stallion would and the alpha like an actual alpha.
Fuck this was incredible
I know pony's think the "biggest" guy around is BicMac... as the name implies...
yet - Trouble Shoes... is a lot taller. Maybe he s the one mentioned?
Running aroused into a princess? ... just his luck :p
This might actually be the hottest thing I have ever seen.
ArmadilloEater: what exactly was the deal with Luna's magic? When she tried to resist the horses' advances, her magic failed. But then, after they had pounded the hell out of her, and that one young stallion needed help, her magic worked perfectly. I had though that maybe alicorn magic doesn't really work in the human world, but again, her magic helped that young stallion without fail. Also, there are the events of later chapters (I'm posting this in the chapter 1 comments section, and I don't want to spoil latter chapters for future readers), where magic seems to work just fine. Could it be that her magic did not succeed because she did not 100% wish for it to succeed?
I have lost my sanity
Can I please remove this from my brain?
as he picked up the pace
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My thinking is that her magic failed either because she subconsciously wanted it to, or because her heat was keeping her from focusing well enough to cast it.
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Maybe?
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No. You shall never ever remove this from your brain! *laughs evilly*
> “I’ll be back to collect thou later, my little stud.”
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I do like how Luna is reading into the emotions and thoughts of the horses too much. Trying to see looks that aren't there.
The wild passion get me in breeding mood every time