Luna was singing a night ballad from the top of her lungs. It was incredible how much power she was able to put into her voice without making it sound like screaming. Her voice would put many human opera singers to shame. Applejack watched her with dreamy eyes that wandered over her body.
We had a pretty large room in the karaoke bar all to ourselves and everyone of us had plenty drinks by this point. That's also the reason why Twily and I decided to take the stage next with a love song duet. With the support of my arm holding her, Twily stood on her hind legs and we sang cheek to cheek.
Meanwhile, under the influence of plenty alcohol, Lyra and Bon Bon started kissing and some of the things they did could even count as heavy petting. As I noticed how much they were in their own world without thinking about us, I started to giggle so much I wasn't able to continue the song. Twilight looked at me confused about this sudden burst of laughter, I pointed towards the pair making out.
“Well that's not a bad idea.”, she said lecherous giving me bedroom eyes.
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I opened my eyes, awoken by the sun shining through the window. My memory was hazy while I looked around. Twilight was clinging to my body while we laid on one of the benches in the karaoke bar.
I felt the pain of a headache as a hangover was taking root, slowly some memories came back to me…
I remembered the owner of the bar wanted us out at some point but Luna had used her princess status to deny that. After he went home and we were the only ones left, the alcohol eliminated even more inhibitions. Then I remembered what happened afterwards… “Oh wow.”, I whispered.
I looked down my body and noticed I only wore my lingerie and Twilight's hoof stuck inside it holding onto my butt. I carefully freed myself from her grasp and stood up searching the room for the rest of my clothing. The other couples also had laid together with their partner embracing each other.
I found my top and skirt a few feet away and noticed the top was slightly ripped, nothing bad, but somepony must have been very eager last night.
I dressed and started to wake my marefriend with gentle kisses on her forehead. She tasted quite salty, it seemed we got a bit sweaty last night. As she began to wake up she drew me into a deep kiss, humming happily.
“Good morning, my love.”, I whispered to her once my lips were free again.
“Morning, honey.”, she replied and yawned.
“Ooohhh, my head. What had happened last night?” It looked like she tried to remember some things until her face suddenly flashed red. “Wait… we did… in front of them?!”
“Well you started it.”, I answered with a lewd smile. “And the others had been quite busy themselves, so they didn't pay much attention to us. Well… except for Lyra who was staring at me the whole time while she brought Bon Bon to cloud nine and beyond… that felt weird, but you were pretty rough yourself, so I had little time to worry about Lyra. But judging by her marefriend’s mad screams of lust Bon Bon wasn't unhappy with the situation.”
“How can you be so casual about this?”, she ask with some anger in her voice.
“Honey, we lost control for a bit but nobody got hurt or should feel bad about what we did. I'm very sorry if we did things you regret now, but last night you had been so eager I didn't question it. It's not like we all have to talk about it. Maybe next time we should drink something non-alcoholic after our first drink.”
I softly kissed her lips and brushed my hand along her face.
She slowly exhaled. “Next time please try to stop me before I do something like this.”
“I promise.”
We kissed again and went through the room carefully waking up the others.
…
I was eating two huge slices of cake in record speed.
“How can you have cake for breakfast?”, my marefriend asked.
I stopped long enough to answer: “Ask Pinkie that question. I need new energy fast and this is the most delicious way of doing it.”
We had decided to go to a nearby bakery to have all breakfast together. Most of them were slowly nibbling a bun but Luna and I had a different way of handling our hangover, we both had huge servings of cake.
“I can’t understand how you all can function on so little food.”, Luna added as she switched from on slice of cake to another.
“Well, you’re much bigger than us, so it’s only natural you need more energy.”, Twilight tried the scientific explanation.
Luna stopped eating and stared at her.
I sensed it would be good to steer the conversation in another direction than Luna’s body… as fast as possible. “Say Luna, can you do some special arrangement of stars for Cadence’s wedding?”
Her gaze lingered a bit longer on my marefriend, but then she turned towards me. “Oh yes, I have planned quite a spectacular view and will even experiment with more moving stars.”
“That sounds amazing.”, I replied. “I can’t wait to see it.”
…
Back in Ponyville Lyra and I concentrated on using the crystal camera again. Lyra had suggested she would use the camera to record the ceremony and I happily agreed. This way I could spend my time with Twily enjoying the wedding.
My marefriend came to our lab two hours later, bringing us a little snack and some apple cider.
“I’ve thought a lot about the wedding lately.”, she told us.
“Of course, since you’re planning it that’s only natural.”, I replied.
“There will be slow and close dancing… and I never really did that.”, she mumbled.
“It doesn’t help that I’m a different species.”, I added and she nodded.
“Well, you still have a lot of time to practice.”, Lyra chimed in. “I’m more than happy to help as well, if you need a training partner for dancing Stella. You would hold my hoof in your hand while your prosthetic held my back and…” She voice changed into a silent mumble and she was drooling.
Twilight looked confused. “Is there something you want to tell me about this?”, she asked me.
“I explain later. Let’s ask Rarity for some help with the dancing. Lyra will probably reset in a moment.”
I pushed her out of the room and told Twilight on our way to her friends boutique all about Lyra’s obsession for my hands and hands in general.
“You really should have told me.”, she responded and sounded a bit angry about the situation.
“I didn’t want to make it awkward between you. It is really harmless, and it's all in her fantasies. She is in a happy relationship with Bon Bon and you know my fingers only explore your private parts.”, I replied grinning.
“Still, please tell me things like that in the future.”, she demanded with a slight blush.
“Of course, my Love. Anything you want.”
I drew her into a deep kiss and made sure she felt my passion for her. Things got heated and soon I dragged her into some bushes, so I could take better care of her. We could visit Rarity some other time.
Can't wait to see what chrysalis does to stella
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I agree totally.
Nice chapter
the bar scene or karaoke was probably a bigger thing, but somehow I'm suprised they dared to do it somewhere in the middle of ponyvilles bushes.
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Yes I'm curious to, but I honestly hope she isn't just going to be a damsel in distress. I know her special science magic stuff is still at the beginning, but I kind of hope she is that kind of character who can at least offer some real help like bein rather sneaky and making an opening for an attack or something like that. Maybe he could use the special link they have for that.
I know sometimes that wish is a bit unrealistic or stupid, but I hate or at least dislike the characters that have nothing to offer beside hiding under a table when the Villains are attacking. In animes or different stories (or RPG forums) I have visitied, there are not really special characters who manage to do amazing things, where you feel like their help was nessecary.
8208542 Knowing how these things go. chrysalis will capture stella and try to milk the love out of her. and since this isn't a chrysalis is good story she will A. Die or B. Run away to return again.
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Interesting thoughts you have there, the next chapter will be quite interesting for you. Of course I can't tell to much about this books ending
8209038 Well I just hope you know what you're plans are for the Queen. Cause I love her.
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8208670 I fear you might be right, that would be how most people would write the story, but you made me get an idea.
I mean shuuldn't Stella notice that it isn't Twilight because of her link?
I mean even if Chrysalis could feel her mistrust, there is a fair chance Chrysalis could believe that she just has to try harder and still feel safe enough that Stella could hit her with some chemicals or something like that, or lead her into a situation that puts her at a disadvantage.
8209038 I really love/like Chrysalis as long as she isn't a queen whore, you probably know there exist that way to write her and another way, with several way how their love eating works and whatever else. However I totally love her personality or her style most of the time, probably my favourite Villain. I mean I love Starlight to but I'm not sure if I see her more as a Villain or not.
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Am I forgetting something or isn't Chrysalis supposed to be replacing Cadance in the wedding scenario?
I'm also wondering if that crystal camera will catch Chrysalis changing or doing something changeling-y? She has no idea what it is and as long as no one tells her what it is, she'll ignore it like so much extraneous furniture in the room. (Would be neat if the camera saw through illusions but that won't help due to changelings physically transforming)
8209783 I tend to write characters differently and I expect you two will love the next addition setup chapter, it will be called "Disguise".
8210042 well "Supposed to replace Cadence", Stella messed up the original timeline enough so all bets are of, maybe she does... or maybe she has planned something else
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Yes but because of Twilights and Stellas special link I totally could image him doing something with that too, maybe Chrysalis tryubg to get some extra energy.
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I made changes to this chapter:
8209783 Lets just hope she gets invited into the threesome. That would make me love this story even more. Or bring fluffy into it. Cause fluffy puff is to pure
8210325 "Oh no, your evil"
*Punsh* *fight noises*
"You know you don't look so bad, wanna f*** together?"
8210346 Or along the lines of feeling all her have die in the shield wipe. Do to them being just drones She gets thrown into EXTREME depression like to the point where she tries to kill herself on the spot since the hive mind has gone silent. And if the hive mind goes silent. It's like feeling all your family die at once. so if any changing is cut off they go mad and try killing themselves or go savage losing all abilities of reason. So since Stella is the caring person we've seen she will help her by giving her love. and maybe this link she has with Twilight can help replace the quiet hive mind that is driving chrysalis to kill herself
8210360 that's dark... But a really nice idea if we were in the original timeline
8210438 What time line are we in then?
8210441 in a new one of course. You can't expect to throw in a new character who interacts with all the major characters and have things play out exactly the same way. Just like the grand galloping gala was quite different thanks to Stella. And we have Luna-AJ, Dashie-Flutters... She even interacted with Chrysalis before. This means all bets are of and things can happen quite different. In fact it would be very boring for me to just retell the vanilla story again.
8210501 makes sense. Makes sense indeed good sir. My words still stand to have chrysalis join the threesome. Just cause I think she's best pony. But it is your world to do as you wish. just remember me of you want to being her back. I got a lot on changing info that could be useful to the magic research going on here. Or just give Twilight something as Stella works on the magic.
8210325 Okay I can't say no to Fluffy, if you mean the pink one
8210154 That is nice enough thank you.
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8210438 that really is a nice idea, but like you said this isn't the show....hhhmmm still maybe the link is going to work. I honestly wouldn't mind Chrysalis as a third party for their relationship. Maybe Stella is going to reform Chrysalis and with the amount of love they could get from the link if I understood his idea right, they could replace the changlings fast enough I guess. (That is if you follow the idea that she can produce normal Changelings with only love energy.
8210501 Yes I somehow hate to have some characters in the story and well you can't have them be awesome, you can't have OP characters actually helping or whatever in some stories because they don't want to change an event. I'm glad you kind of go your own way.
8210679 To be honest I totally start to like the idea, but more with the background of Chrysalis actually wanting to get in the relationship with them too. It could be pretty funny, I don't mean she would have to force Twilight into stuff she doesn't want, but I expect her being more dirty with the jokes or when she wants it.
She is probably going on Twilights nerves with her dirty talk (or you make her a more sympathic character, maybe both?, that is if Chrysalis should enter a relationship with them).
She definitly would have more energy or a little bit more energy than Stella I guess.
I can see them have their own strenght and completing each other.
3 Engel für Charly
3 angels for Charly?
3 fillyfooler for Celestia?
Yes the idea got to me. However definitly make Chrysalis to be a sympatic character like I think you mentioned.
8210796 I'm glad you understand me
8210796 the Flufflepuff - Chrysalis shipping is about adorable in every way. Pinky - Chrysalis is too.
I don't write for long now, but it was one of my favorite moments when I discovered 'Wait a minute, her appearance in the world scrambles up the common timeline already, I can write what I want'
I'm not sure you will be totally satisfied with the next chapter since it hint at things you don't like, but I hope the characterisation of Chryssi makes it up.
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Ah yes I got the feeling it has to do with Chrysalis, but I guess with the right reasoning it shouldn’t be to bad.
I mean it doesn’t really have to be the way I described it several times now, but I wait and see what happens.
Now that I think about it, one of the reasons she was probably forced to live like that or react in several stories, that she needed an army and probably lost many Changelings that needed to be replaced.
If really happens what I think is going to happen if you talk like that, then maybe after the comming events Chrysalis can start to care for herself instead for the safety of her kindom, if you should decide to reform her.
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It is crazy how many times I rewrote the hazy chapter, I added an excuse from Stella to Twily, I felt she needed one. I cant wait to publish the next chapter but haven't got feedback from my proofreader yet. I guess it is better this way since I already started to write the final chapter (or maybe the the one before the last, I will write one big chapter or two small ones) and I always need more time for the end of stories to make sure everything fits together.
This new spoiler tag is weird, I feel like I need new glasses looking at it.
In all my stories Chrysalis is a princess instead of the queen (at least at the start), so I can sidestep the reproduce question, but she explains the whole system pretty well in "Know your enemy".
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yep the new spoiler system is or at least looks bad.
Well maybe I take a look at it, or could you even mention the right chapter for me?
Like I said there are several ways to handle it as far as I noticed, but making her a princess could give her an execuse for that I guess. I don’t know what else to say, most of the time I just think why are they acting like that if they are not mare animals humans, but at the same time I think I can’t use that reason for Chrysalis since her hive kind of looks like a bee hive.
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Well its in the third chapter of "Know your enemy" - it's called "Journey"
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"When you had been out in the world, gathering love, have you ever considered just staying with a stallion... forever?"
"That's not how we changelings are trained to do it. Long contacts increase the risk of being discovered. Three days should be maximum since a regular changling would not be able to store additional love after that anyway. Well, I can store a lot more, but still, the rule is three days.", she said while she stared into the fire. It sounds the way I started to suggest it could be myself. I’m not sure how much I understood right now, but it sounded like they only need special circumstances for queen eggs and I’m not sure if they needed to mate for regular eggs too or if they do some animal egg stuff.
I went as a light brown unicorn to Manehatten and searched for a stallion. I played the part of a clumsy mare on the ice rink, and within minutes a unicorn stallion was very eager to help me. He invited me to dinner, and everything went as planned. After another date the next day, we ended up in his apartment and in his bed. I had a fantastic night with him and gathered a lot of love while doing it. now this doesn’t goes against her, but I feel like to many story characters let themself get laid far to fast.
Well the whole thing looks close enough to what I wanted to get and I only wanted to avoid making her a whore, for whatever biogical reason she maybe has. I guess at some point they can stop doing it, since the world can only hold so many changelings.
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She hasn't told it here in detail, but in my mind she needs sperm only for the princess eggs and those are very rare.
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Okay now I’m sure it is exactly how I think about the situation as well.
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For me there isn’t only one right way to write her, not sure in which amount this is canon. I don’t really care if a huge amount of fans like to think like that. Right now it seems a bit like when others blindly follow fashion and hate others if they don’t wear the right clothes.
I just mean I don’t like to just think it “has” to be a certain way just because most people like it that way.
Sorry I have a headache and don’t to sound mean, but I believe I answered how I meant to.
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There isn't anything canon about "Hands"-Lyra but many people seem to think it's funny, like I do myself from time to time. But this doesn't make her more or less real than any other interpretation of her, everything is fair game in fanfiction.
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From what little the show has shown of Lyra and Bonbon and what Hasbro has stated on the subject, I think they are meant to be polar opposites with Lyra being a positive, eccentric, and enthusiastic personality, while Bonbon is meant to be a bit cynical, straight laced, and reserved. However I think everyone should have the right to embrace their own head canon and interpret whatever they want.
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I can’t say anything against that, I just don’t like to say something is only right in a certain way.
I mean it is like saying a movie is stupid, while it is only stupid for that one person and the others might like it.
I hope that makes sense, I’m not trying to sound offending or something like that.
8217648 Yep sometimes I enjoy that too and sometimes it can be annoying.