I have been watching so much Robot chicken as of late that this entire story has now turned into a one long running robot chicken story to me now. Especially the part about the not getting by lightning.
Flurry needs to talk to a lawyer, honestly. Unless Equestria/Crystal Empire has some really screwed up laws, her birth parents shouldn't be able to keep her restrained and confined the way they are.
Either that or just face them down and say, "I'm leaving. What will you do to stop me? Force me? Hurt me? Imprison me? Ensorcel me to obey? Is that who you are?"
My only real complaint about this story, is the fact that Flurry just seems entirely too passive. She kinda started sticking up for herself near the end of this chapter, but before that she just kinda let them do whatever they wanted without even opening her mouth or resisting at all. There are a few grammar and spelling issues, but those are easily fixed. Other than that, I'm enjoying this so far, keep it up!
7882092 I blame The logic of the king and queen in Frozen for this. Look over it all you want but their decision to cut her away from emotional contact at a very young age, teaching her to bottle up her emotions and to never interact with others was a VERY poor decision on their part. Thank HISHE for creating a video for Frozen that helps explain away this tendency in a very creative fashion.
This story is really making me hate Cadance.
I have been watching so much Robot chicken as of late that this entire story has now turned into a one long running robot chicken story to me now. Especially the part about the not getting by lightning.
What's next? Sleeping with Space Mareines?
I love how this story actually acknowledges The Crystal Empire as an empire lead by an empress (and emperor-consort XD).
I really hate Cadance and Shining in this fic....
Flurry needs to talk to a lawyer, honestly. Unless Equestria/Crystal Empire has some really screwed up laws, her birth parents shouldn't be able to keep her restrained and confined the way they are.
Either that or just face them down and say, "I'm leaving. What will you do to stop me? Force me? Hurt me? Imprison me? Ensorcel me to obey? Is that who you are?"
7882062 Why Shining?
7882092 Well they are the unilateral leaders of an empire, they are technically the law.
7881026 40k FTW!
7883167 So "screwed up legal system" it is, then.
"tome", I expect.
My only real complaint about this story, is the fact that Flurry just seems entirely too passive. She kinda started sticking up for herself near the end of this chapter, but before that she just kinda let them do whatever they wanted without even opening her mouth or resisting at all. There are a few grammar and spelling issues, but those are easily fixed. Other than that, I'm enjoying this so far, keep it up!
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I blame The logic of the king and queen in Frozen for this.
Look over it all you want but their decision to cut her away from emotional contact at a very young age, teaching her to bottle up her emotions and to never interact with others was a VERY poor decision on their part. Thank HISHE for creating a video for Frozen that helps explain away this tendency in a very creative fashion.