Two week old Flurry Heart has been foalnaped, will her parents ever see her again?
Cool beans, only thing: you do need an editor.
It's suite, not suit. That's only one glaring problem of many, I'm afraid.
I'm glad to see some update to this. Here's an error that I've noticed
“Shining, ask her how old ‘I’ am.”“Cady, how hold is Flurry now?”
hold should be old
8103441 and fixed, thank you.
Cool beans, only thing: you do need an editor.
It's suite, not suit. That's only one glaring problem of many, I'm afraid.
I'm glad to see some update to this. Here's an error that I've noticed
hold should be old
8103441 and fixed, thank you.