A closet brony finds that Lyra Heartstrings is real, though she is a filly, and decides to take her under his care. As time passes, the two go on to share a strong friendship, but due to Lyra's accelerated aging, might become even more...
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A pity but it had to be done. Remember Kyle. she always will be in your heart.
This chapter is literally the Lyra version of the ending of "My Little Dashie". I kinda wished
Kyle could go home with Lyra. Celestia could've turned him into a pony for christ sakes.
Why.. why does this has to happen?! You better make everything alright in the next chapter! ðŸ˜
This would be a fitting song:
Is this the final chapter ?
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There's going to be an epilogue.
Thank's and I hope is good news This story ended very sad
Well then
This was a really long retelling of My Little Dashie.
I can sort of understand bringing Lyra back to Equestria, but is giving her false memories to compensate for the lost 14 years and at the risk of replacing the real 7 years of memories really necessary?
Good story, the plot pleased me more than My Little Dashie.
The only thing I did not like was the way the ponies see humans .
In this fic, humans are not only considered hostile, but primitive; something even worse, which I personally hate seeing in a fic mlp.
In part I understand, surely that Celestia had bad experiences with humans from the remote past; that made her prejudiced and this to the ponies.
As DEMONS, ponies will know more about SCIENCE than humans; if they are relatively technologically LESS advanced than us; In addition, this fic and its sequel do not take place a futuristic Equestria or in an ancient human land.
In the canon, Dr. Hooves in one of his sentences lets us know that the ponies see science as something secondary to magic and a last resort when it comes to explaining phenomena, including temporary and interdimensional travel; therefore, his study could not yet be so deep as to be able to create a portal through quantum physics. This also because the magic is what makes the impossible in mlp and not vice versa.
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In summary, that Dr. Hooves has managed to use science in a portal rather than magic, it is in my humble opinion, absurd and unrealistic. It is unlikely that the ponies of a canon universe know more about quantum physics than humans.
In addition, it is mentioned that both the doctor took years to investigate Lyra's whereabouts, as Celestia and twilight took that same time to create the spell to travel to the earth; So the magical journey was possible. Taking into account the idea of ​​prior priority; the probability that in reality, canonical ponies first discovered how to travel by magic than by science, is much higher.
This is just my opinion, your reasons have to use that idea.
The rest of the story and its sequel are very good, romance is the best, my congratulations .