A closet brony finds that Lyra Heartstrings is real, though she is a filly, and decides to take her under his care. As time passes, the two go on to share a strong friendship, but due to Lyra's accelerated aging, might become even more...
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Where can I find generalzoi?
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He/she has an account on DeviantArt. The sprite of Lyra in the cover art was made with the Pony Creator flash program he/she created.
Sounds like a good beginning. A new era, without ed and his anger. Eager to See what the future of them will bring
I highly doubt it is that easy.
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The ‘zoi’ makes me think of anime King Dedede (Japanese one, not ‘‘Clobbah dat dere Kirbeh’’ one), who tended to end sentences with -zoi.
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It hasn't happened to me personally, but one of my classmates told me about it happening to him, which made me think of adding it to the story. I'd say women constantly have their guard up. It's their emotional defense mechanism; they are not psychologically programmed to "give themselves away," and when asked out so suddenly, immediately start (subconsciously) thinking of bad-case scenarios. At least... that's my guess.
It's nice to see Kyle finally able to move out of that awful home and away from his demanding stepdad and brother. Now that Ed is no longer standing between them, I hope he'll be able to find his mom.
Well this is an interesting start of a new era. No more Ed, no more Danny, no more mean bosses or customers, have their own home so now Lyra doesn't have to hide in the house anymore, she has just as much freedom of the house as Kyle has, because it's all theirs. All those years of misery are now behind them. So long and a hardy f*ck you to Ed and Danny.
It would have been nice to see a little more romantic development during the time Kyle and Lyra lived at ed's; a sort of forbidden love, if you will. It feels like we missed an important part of their lives. I don't mind time skips, it's just that this one seemed premature.
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Yeah, in retrospect... I'm kinda kicking myself for that.