A closet brony finds that Lyra Heartstrings is real, though she is a filly, and decides to take her under his care. As time passes, the two go on to share a strong friendship, but due to Lyra's accelerated aging, might become even more...
Page generated in 0.019 seconds
Total duration
970 users online
146,590 hits today, 2,244,100 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Please continue
Lyra to the rescue! Well, some people are really stupid, like that woman.
Alright, so... first off, the woman.
Fuck her.
Alright.
Yeah.
I work fast food, and know how people can be. This is quite an accurate depiction, and have had many people tell me I should be fired because 'I don't know how money works,' 'I am bad at my job,' etc.
But I have one problem with this chapter. The snow, ice, and the fact that this character was apparently going fast enough to be unable to gain traction and turn/stop, and still hit a tree hard enough to completely total the car (especially if it hit the corner of the vehicle).
Seriously, basic drivers education. When visibility is poor and you know it's icy, you slow down. Especially so if the visibility was so poor that he was unable to notice the sign indicating a turn ahead, not to mention the fact that it said 'he had to focus so hard on seeing that he didn't realize he was going fast.' Wat? How does one not realize that their foot is to the floor (exaggeration, but you get my point.)?
Sure, maybe an amateur driver may make this mistake, but how old is he now? And how long has he been driving?
Anyways, my short point being, your character isn't a good driver.
(And that's it for my rant, sorry. I just find that part really annoying.)
But this all being said, I still like the story and will continue following it.
...
I usually try to write something funny in a comment as well but can't think of anything other than,
"Damn, he is literally a chick magnet." (Get it? Cuz Lyra's horn is dragging her to... bleh. Twas a bad joke.)
8077433 hey people make stupid mastakes i have walked into doors before thinking i already opened it.
*Your
Also, I found that woman to be very comparable to a tumblr feminist.
8077477
I suppose, he might have also just wanted to hurry home as well.