Interesting concept. I was thinking about writing something like that too sometime. Only with an HiE zebra colt.
There are a few typos here and there, but overall it's an enjoyable read. Especially loved the part at the end with the CMC. Heh. The CMC cumdumpsters for our little naughty protagonist! The only question is if Big Mac will get angry or join in on the fun?
I also noticed I wasn't following you. So I quickly rectified this!
8153800 It was considered before as a Zebra character, specifically with Zakia from the Kwa series but I felt something more vanilla and different was more what I was wanting. Hence why the ram colt Terra was used instead. To try and be a more vanilla contrast to the Zebra Domination series with Zakia and the Siri.
The character is in any case unique, so I like him! The fact that he has a canon character as a perverted mom only enhances this story for me even more, considering the increase in debauchery!
While there are a few too many typos for my liking (I'd recommend you get an editor), this is an interesting premise I'm surprised hasn't been tried already. Also, to help build interest, I'd recommend spreading this out to a bunch of other groups.
8172907 I've been doing that for him, if you click the icon of the 3 people near the Triangle with the ! you can add it to groups. I've added it to many myself but I know I have not covered all of them.
Might I recommend you do someone like Gilda, Gabby, A crystal pony, a changeling, and or dragon lord Ember next, I don't know why but I just feel like the next one should involve something more, exotic. You get what I mean?
Thanks again for another amazing piece of work! Well worth the wait and is always a pleasure to work with. :D
Hope everyone enjoys it.
So.....
Good luck with your new story, dear.
Interesting concept. I was thinking about writing something like that too sometime. Only with an HiE zebra colt.
There are a few typos here and there, but overall it's an enjoyable read. Especially loved the part at the end with the CMC. Heh. The CMC cumdumpsters for our little naughty protagonist! The only question is if Big Mac will get angry or join in on the fun?
I also noticed I wasn't following you. So I quickly rectified this!
loving all the cumflation stuff~
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It was considered before as a Zebra character, specifically with Zakia from the Kwa series but I felt something more vanilla and different was more what I was wanting. Hence why the ram colt Terra was used instead. To try and be a more vanilla contrast to the Zebra Domination series with Zakia and the Siri.
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The character is in any case unique, so I like him! The fact that he has a canon character as a perverted mom only enhances this story for me even more, considering the increase in debauchery!
Ignoring the many typo's this fic was very.. arrousing
This story is nut(s)
While there are a few too many typos for my liking (I'd recommend you get an editor), this is an interesting premise I'm surprised hasn't been tried already. Also, to help build interest, I'd recommend spreading this out to a bunch of other groups.
8172907 I've been doing that for him, if you click the icon of the 3 people near the Triangle with the ! you can add it to groups. I've added it to many myself but I know I have not covered all of them.
This was awesome. read Ihope she really is pregnant.
Just noticed this is a commission. I really hope there will be more chapters of it.
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There will be
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Cool! I'm thrilled in any case how this continues. Especially with the CMC and Big Mac!
This story is fantastic. The "Small dom Big sub" genre is so underappreciated
Might I recommend you do someone like Gilda, Gabby, A crystal pony, a changeling, and or dragon lord Ember next, I don't know why but I just feel like the next one should involve something more, exotic. You get what I mean?
whens this getting an update
Is this already dead..?