Discord's been naughty. Stellar gets involved, but can she make a difference on an alien world?
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I can say this story is vary much something to keep a eye on.
vary good planning for details and it flows really good.
now we weight for the next chapter.
PS Stellar Light Sparkle do not get depressed as to the lack of vote count after all the five score story line is not only a hard cell but it is a totally different kind of story to read and to be honest most do not follow it.
and have you added this to the five score group?
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Yes, the story is up in the group Five Score, Multiplied By More. I'm also a member there.
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heh. i can understand your reservations. But Stellar's passed the Mary Sue test a few times. And while i can say she is powerful, she is also very disciplined. She's as powerful as Twilight is, and has a few extras like her armor, She does have her flaws as well, which will come out in the story.
I know the pace is accelerated, but I'm trying to squeeze a certain amount of content and travel in before certain events happen in a few other stories, and there are deadlines that have to be met to fit it in. Plus, travel is fast-paced by it's very nature in Australia. Unlike the US, where you can cross through three states in three hours, here the states are so big that you can spend a week travelling in one state in a straight line and not leave it. So there is a LOT of empty space that has been left out. The outback does not have the nick-name the G.A.F.A (The Great Australian Fuck-All) for nothing.
Okay...All caught up.
Still rather confused about the story. I get they are travelling, and I understand where to. And I'd love to know what timeline you are adhering to when it comes to such events (if you don't want to say publicly, you can send me a PM). I find I care about, and even like your main characters, Stellar is still rather excessively powerful....And that's coming from the author who wrote Lightning Dust in Dust on the Wind. Still weirded out when it comes to all the Equestrian stuff she has access to. I do find I'm curious to see what is coming next.
As a fellow author, if you want to chat about the story, just hit me up with a PM and we can talk.
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Yeah... one missing letter. Comes from formatting it manually. >:P Fixed now.
Yeah. I understand it's like that. Problem is there's not much doing with them as they're changing. Even stellar's plans got changed along the way with the others showing up. I might write something else into that chapter as soon as i get what's flowing through me at the moment out of the way.