I dont mean any disrespect when i say this but...i dont get where this is going. To me this whole story is a complete mess, like i get whats going on but whats the purpose of all this? I think the thing that bugs me the most about this story is: A, why did Eric and Gabe keep their dicks but the others didnt? might aswell let them loose it aswell it would have felt more complete story wise. They find the gem, have sex, transform, boom, done. Why are these two the only acception? i dont get it. B, Eric and Gabe are nothing like their pony counterparts. Scott,Andy,Jake,Chriss are perfectly fine, they match to their pony counterparts. Yes i know that its a bit soon to judge since its not finished yet and it might surprise me and i realise its fiction but these things just bother me narrative wise i guess. I believe these would have been better as individual storys with the same premise. Guy finds gem, turns into sexy anthro girl, gets attracted to best friend, they have sex and maybe have the partner turn into a sexy male anthro probably. I donno. Apologese for the wall of text, i just like to went on storys that i like and find interesting.
And that's how Earth became Equestria. Although in all fairness I am a bit curious as to why you decided for them to become Nightmare Moon and Daybreaker rather then Celestia and Luna.
When I saw the first update (A blazing sun) I thought "Ooo celestia is here too" but not it was Sunset (she is one of my favorite characters so it's even better), now after sleep I check comments and see that another update appeared. I looked at title "Well now it must be Celestia and probably Luna too" but Nope it's Daybreaker and Nightmare Moon Looks like author chose a good reason for Harmony herd to leave their "hermitage" (because if they don't start work against them soon, ponies will be stigmatized by Sister/Best Friends actions)..........also now i curious what causes it all, is it just Discord be bored and changing people into anthro or something much,much bigger, like it was always their true form, which was sealed for some reason, similar to Five Score, Divided by Four Well we will see also to Autor: Thanks for good double update
Oh boy, are we getting bad guys to counter the mane six + sunset now? Just got Daybreaker and Nightmare Moon, and they know of another that is sure to accept the armor... maybe a Rule 63 Sombra, or maybe an evil Cadence(I always liked the name Decadence for her personally)?
OMG Daybreaker and Nightmare Moon I hope they become friends with the main cast ane become Princess Celestiaia and Princess Luna soon.This was a awesome read.
So next would be... Changeling crown? Cadences crown? A cheap-looking plastic headband with a goat's horn and a deer's antler? ... Actually yes. Go for the last one. ERIS TO HELP TAKE OVER THE WORLD!!!!!
i know i am gonna regret saying this before finishing the chapter but "Yay. We're getting Daybreaker instead of sun butt. She is slightly less evil and far more pleasant a conversationalist."
“Steve, if I find out my ass gets plastered on the internet, I’ll do things to you that the devil would disapprove of,” Isaac warned, glaring at him as he grabbed a tissue from the coffee table. He knelt down in front of Steve, giving him the tissue. “You’re such a dick.”
*me, Satan, Jesus, and Michael look up from our poker game* "Ooh, this sounds like its about to get really interesting."
And we got Daybreaker and Nightmare Moon
......... Well, shit.
I dont mean any disrespect when i say this but...i dont get where this is going. To me this whole story is a complete mess, like i get whats going on but whats the purpose of all this?
I think the thing that bugs me the most about this story is:
A, why did Eric and Gabe keep their dicks but the others didnt? might aswell let them loose it aswell it would have felt more complete story wise. They find the gem, have sex, transform, boom, done. Why are these two the only acception? i dont get it.
B, Eric and Gabe are nothing like their pony counterparts. Scott,Andy,Jake,Chriss are perfectly fine, they match to their pony counterparts.
Yes i know that its a bit soon to judge since its not finished yet and it might surprise me and i realise its fiction but these things just bother me narrative wise i guess.
I believe these would have been better as individual storys with the same premise. Guy finds gem, turns into sexy anthro girl, gets attracted to best friend, they have sex and maybe have the partner turn into a sexy male anthro probably. I donno.
Apologese for the wall of text, i just like to went on storys that i like and find interesting.
Welp... the 'sisters' are making their move soon
And that's how Earth became Equestria. Although in all fairness I am a bit curious as to why you decided for them to become Nightmare Moon and Daybreaker rather then Celestia and Luna.
When I saw the first update (A blazing sun) I thought "Ooo celestia is here too" but not it was Sunset (she is one of my favorite characters so it's even better), now after sleep I check comments and see that another update appeared. I looked at title "Well now it must be Celestia and probably Luna too" but Nope it's Daybreaker and Nightmare Moon
Looks like author chose a good reason for Harmony herd to leave their "hermitage" (because if they don't start work against them soon, ponies will be stigmatized by Sister/Best Friends actions)..........also now i curious what causes it all, is it just Discord be bored and changing people into anthro or something much,much bigger, like it was always their true form, which was sealed for some reason, similar to Five Score, Divided by Four
Well we will see also to Autor:
Thanks for good double update
Oh boy, are we getting bad guys to counter the mane six + sunset now? Just got Daybreaker and Nightmare Moon, and they know of another that is sure to accept the armor... maybe a Rule 63 Sombra, or maybe an evil Cadence(I always liked the name Decadence for her personally)?
OMG Daybreaker and Nightmare Moon I hope they become friends with the main cast ane become Princess Celestiaia and Princess Luna soon.This was a awesome read.
So next would be... Changeling crown? Cadences crown? A cheap-looking plastic headband with a goat's horn and a deer's antler?
...
Actually yes. Go for the last one. ERIS TO HELP TAKE OVER THE WORLD!!!!!
8291235 maybe Celestia and Luna are different ponies in this one.
I just binge-read this, and goddamn, this is something else.
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This that good or bad?
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I'm not entirely sure yet. Let me get back to you on it.
Is this story on hiatus?
Umm is this alive you had a good start so what happened? You loose interest? If that’s the case can a fan keep it alive for you?
Yo! You still kickin'!?
i know i am gonna regret saying this before finishing the chapter but "Yay. We're getting Daybreaker instead of sun butt. She is slightly less evil and far more pleasant a conversationalist."
*me, Satan, Jesus, and Michael look up from our poker game* "Ooh, this sounds like its about to get really interesting."