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I'm enjoying the direction / main plot line of the story.
But some of the mistakes make this difficult to read. I'm probably not the best for advice as its been years since I've written any fiction. But when I write I type my ideas as they come out of my mind. Then edit.. edit.. and edit. When Ideas come out of my head they make perfect sense to me, but they often don't clearly convey my message to an audience if I don't go back and check basically every detail. Usually in three sweeps checking first for spelling, grammar. Then flow, and finally reading it out loud and making sure I didn't make a mistake while fixing things.
8226998 thanks for the advice.
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!! nice one!
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Yeah, that is something that I am working on. When I first wrote the story, which was like 2 years ago, I thought it looked better for the paragraphs to be longer. Now it would take too long to look over the whole story to fix that but I do plan on doing that sometime in the future.