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Can you please just finally make them talk to each other? From chapter to chapter this story gets more boring and most of all annoying because noone can open their stupid mouth
And that after 30 chapters . . .
This story is so desperadly trying to be creepy and crazy
But it just doesnt work if the characters dont act relatable :/
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Sorry. It been hard to write with everything going on with my life. I kinda started not caring for writing but I continued so I wouldn't give up on the story. Now the story is suffering because of it. I'm sorry. I'm almost done with it. So you won't need to worry. Next chapter, I swear to you, they will finally talk to each other.
Should be open.
You probably meant "reminded".
Should be "quiet".
Should be "grip".
An "and" is missing between "eyes" and "fell".
Should be "stunned".
One "again" too much.