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Nah, just thought it would be helpful to note some of the typos or minor mistakes I noticed. I generally do it whenever I start reading a story.
Again. "least".
should be "happened".
Again.
Again. "least".
Again. "happened".
(there are more instances of you writing "lease instead of "least" so just ctrl+F for lease don't think need to point out more)
(same with happen and happened)
nights.
Should be "zoned".