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Why do I keep running into these stories???!!
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If you "keep running into" these kinds of stories, despite the tags and the title and the description warning you, to the point where you stumble into the comments section as well, it just might be you.
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lol. Maybe...maybe they find...YOUUUUU!
Dun dun DUUUNN!!
This is not a bad concept. I'm glad to see someone take this idea and write on it. One thing I would advice, assuming you want any feedback that is, is to slow the pace down and build up some tension. I'd recommend writing other stories to get a sense for this, because it's not something I or really anyone can just tell you how to do.
But I hope you continue with this and build it up more. Good luck on your writing!
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Thank you for your input!
I am always open to feedback, whether it be good or bad, for how else will I improve? I consider your comments well into the good category, for it helps me focus on a problem area.
In any case, thank you for reading, and thank you for commenting!
7725054 Just admit that you like what you read. XD
I think I do too. Despite not having an interest with Anthro stories.
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Agreed. But still if I could I would shake this stallion hand myself and give him a gun or a musket for home defense.