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Desperate times call for desoperate messaures, and they are never easy.
But, it gives one hope to see the Griffins and co wanting to free Equestria from this
I'd rather see the caribou win, honestly.
Good chapter. However I don't think I would have killed Octavia. Just as the Caribou was about to Pitchfork to her stomach I would have told one of them to stop. Death is too good for this b**** I would have put her out public display and basically let the entire town Ponyville have their way with her. Put a gag in her mouth so she can't clamp down again and let every stallion basically rut her from the rising of the Sun to the lowering of the Moon.
The truth is out, Big Mac is going to get it.
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I don't know how to feel about this,
on one hand they should've choose her battles.
on the other hand things are not going to go well for the apple siblings.
on yet another hand I have been watching the horror geek's movies on youtube and there have been some penis mutilations so kinda numb to it happening.
nice to know that there is some mares that haven't lost that spark of freedom that should make this more interesting as I kinda want to see them somewhat succeed. This would be a good time to stage a revolution for Big mac since now your fucked if you do and fucked if you don't.
rarity just became best pony of the main six of this fic.
rarity-1st place working with the resistance
fluttershy-2nd place not enough scene time until she was corrupted
pinkie pie-3rd place, even though she's corrupted she has never betrayed her element by bringing joy to those around her just ask the males around her even I cant really stay mad at her
applejack-4th place, her stubbornness lead to a moral choice where Big mac had to drug her
rainbow dash-5th place, she knew what she did
twilight sparkle-6th place, you betrayed your element by helping to corrupt your friend
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That section was very hard to write, as I felt sympathetic pain for the Caribou. I'm still a bit shook up about it, so much so I slept until 5 in the afternoon and didn't eat until after 7.
This story is taking its toll on me, but I will finish it.
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Letting her live was a path I briefly considered, but I was going to have the Caribou blank her, to show the horrible process. In the end, I decided upon a heroic death, for killing off main characters is something I do not do lightly.
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Having read the story thus far, I hope you all have noticed that I do not take the subject of rape lightly. The few examples I've written show it in its bare form, and in this chapter, I wanted to show there are some who simply couldn't be corrupted. I know it's all harmless fantasy, but I wanted to portray the very real reactions of someone who was faced with a horrific choice: be raped, or die.
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I'm still shaken up about that character death revelation a chapters ago, that already turned my hopes of the resistance being successful of being questionable at best. going to re-read the last few chapters for any hints I missed of HER really being a delusion.
an hour later
yep SHE's dead as no one other than Fine interacted with her.
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Hm. You know, that brings up an interesting angle I've never seen tackled. What if there's one or more mares who WANT to be corrupted, but it doesn't work on them?
In your story, the Corruption works a lot like a drug. When some females see the more corrupted ones embrace what's happening with masochistic happiness, would it make sense for a few to want the same? To rather be a happy slave than an unhappy rape victim? It's horrible, but it's not unlike numbing the pain with medication. How much worse would it be if they find out it just won't work on them?
Imagine, say, Vapor Trail. She wants to be with Sky Stinger again. She wants to be his happy slave. But it just won't work, she's immune.
This was a tough chapter to read. I felt so bad for Vinyl and Octavia! But I was glad to know that some mares couldn't be affected by the Caribou spells. Ditto for Rarity, normally in the the FOE canon Rarity is a collaborator with the Caribou (either through corruption or to protect her little sister, Sweetie Belle) but here she just made herself 20% cooler by turning up at the meeting between the Minotaur and Gryphon generals as they plan to attack the Caribou.
I am always glad to see Griffins (or Gryphons) in MLP, although the only Minotaur I saw in the series was Iron WIll who is more of a spokesperson than anything else. Perhaps Iron Will is related to the Minotaur general in this chapter. I would be interested in seeing if they can free Equestria.
Things just went from bad to worse for the Apple family! Although Big Mac (truly a stallion among ponies) and his sisters have had to do the most degrading things to hang onto their farm, the fickle finger of fate has pointed against them. Since it now looks like their f***ed no matter what they do, perhaps they need to join the rebellion as well. If the Minotaurs and Gryphons succeed in overturning the Caribou, what would happen with the other element bearers? Especially those who have succumbed (like Twilight Sparkle and Fluttershy)? Not to mention the family that was the original focus of this? The ones who are surviving anyway.
I realize this is a Fall of Equestria story as opposed to a Post-Fall one, but I am rooting for a liberation of Equestria at the end of this. But it's your story and not mine.
She went down fighting...
FUCK those bastards...they couldn't break her, no matter what they did...fucking HERO...