Twilight gets Nurses

by CAPTAIN YOSHI HD

Twilight gets her nurses

Twilight Sparkle is sick in her castle, she's laying down in her bed. Her brain was hurting, her belly was aching, and her hind-hooves were shaking with goosebumps. Seven friends came into her room, Spike, Starlight Glimmer, Rainbow Dash, Pinkie Pie, Applejack, Rarity, and Fluttershy. "Hey, gang.", Twilight said.

"How are you feeling, Twilight?", Spike asked.

"Sorry you look like this, Twi.", Starlight said.

"Later, you'll feel 20% cooler again.", Rainbow Dash said.

"You need tasty treats to make you feel better, Twilight.", Pinkie Pie said.

"Stay strong, Sugar cube.", Applejack said.

"Poor Dear, you look dreadful.", Rarity said.

"I know you've been sick for the past few days, but, we can't stay here to make you feel better.", Fluttershy said.

"What do you mean, Fluttershy?", Twilight asked.

"We got nurses.", Fluttershy said.

"What?", Twilight asked.

"Come on in, Girls.", Applejack said.

Six little fillies walked in the room, Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle, Scootaloo, Diamond Tiara, Silver Spoon, and Babs Seed. "Hey, Twilight.", Apple Bloom said.

"Did somepony called a nurse?", Sweetie Belle asked.

"Howdy do.", Scootaloo said.

"Hey, Miss Sick Pony.", Diamond Tiara said.

"Need a soup?", Silver Spoon said.

"Got some treats here.", Babs said.

Twilight dropped her jaw. "YOU GUYS BROUGHT THEM HERE?!", she said.

"Of course we did.", Spike said. "Like I said, we can't be here all day."

The fillies hopped on Twilight. "Here, Twilight, I got you some pepto-bismol.", Apple Bloom said.

"No! I'm not drinking that.", Twilight said.

"Come on, they can't be here all day, they have to do other things.", Sweetie Belle said.

"Hmm. Fine.", Twilight grumbled as she took the cup of pepto-bismol and drank it.

"How can you drink it like that?", Rainbow Dash said.

"Alright, now that you're finished with that, it's nap time.", Scootaloo said grabbing the covers and pulling them over Twilight's head. The fillies hopped off the bed and walked out the room.

"You see, Darling, they're going to take care of you.", Rarity said.

"I'm not staying in this castle with a group of fillies.", Twilight said angrily.

"Twilight, we're sorry, we're truely are.", Applejack said. "We can't be here all day."

"I see them in the library looking for something.", Spike said.

The fillies were in the library looking for a cure book. "Holy crap.", Silver Spoon said. "How many books does she keep?"

"Can you please get them out the castle?", Twilight asked with a grumpy look.

The library was across the hallway and fillies can easily hear her. Then, the fillies walked back in the bedroom. "What did you say?", Diamond Tiara asked.

Twilight pulled the covers over her head.

"You want us in the castle?", Babs asked.

"You're not feeling any better?", Scootaloo asked.

The fillies hopped on the bed again. Apple Bloom tried to pull the covers off Twilight's head. "Come on, uncover your head.", Apple Bloom said.

"Help me, girls!", Twilight said.

"We're trying to help you out, Princess.", Sweetie Belle said.

"Help!", Twilight says again.

"Can you calm yourself?", Diamond Tiara asks calmly.

"Spike paid us to help you.", Scootaloo said.

"Spike, you paid them?!", Twilight asked in a shocked way.

"Yes.", Spike said. "And I told you a million times already, we can't be here all day."

"You need a belly pumping?", Babs asked. "I ain't doing that."

"Yeah, pump my belly.", Twilight said. "Do it."

"Heck no!", Silver Spoon said.

"Pump it!", Twilight said.

"I ain't pumping anypony's stomach.", Apple Bloom said.

"Pump my belly! Pump my belly!", Twilight said again.

"Nope.", Sweetie Belle said. "You couldn't pay us enough to pump her belly."

Comments

[Penn Hooven]

I'm just going to suggest that you read some of the more popular stories to see the flow of telling a story. This feels wooden, almost like an outline rather than a completed story.

[OmniFox]

Could be worse.