After landing in Equestria as a big, green minotaur, his only plan was gettting a hug from his favorite pony. As it turned out, he was going to need it. Because being Fudge, is suffering.
Have I ever mentioned how much I love the parts where you build Fudge's undying hatred for Zeta? If not, then let me say it now, I love when you foreshadow Zeta's role.
Also, Zeta really wouldn't say “So you're the one who's been hunting me?” He asked. “Did you kill all these people?” More like "So, you're the one that wants me dead huh?" He asked. Motioning around towards the bodies he continued "Looks like you've been busy, but did you really need to kill these guys? I doubt they would be much trouble."
I have to say, I'm really enjoying Boxer's character. You did the "villain building" incredibly well, great strength mixed with a kind of brilliant sadism and some implied connections to the pony government? Riveting, I say!
Have I ever mentioned how much I love the parts where you build Fudge's undying hatred for Zeta? If not, then let me say it now, I love when you foreshadow Zeta's role.
Also, Zeta really wouldn't say “So you're the one who's been hunting me?” He asked. “Did you kill all these people?” More like "So, you're the one that wants me dead huh?" He asked. Motioning around towards the bodies he continued "Looks like you've been busy, but did you really need to kill these guys? I doubt they would be much trouble."
Ooh the foreshadowing the sweet sweet foreshadowing. You could get diabetes from foreshadowing this good.
I have to say, I'm really enjoying Boxer's character. You did the "villain building" incredibly well, great strength mixed with a kind of brilliant sadism and some implied connections to the pony government? Riveting, I say!
Pull out clock. Set timer, and toss it into the wreckage.
The world ages around him ...
Ah, Rorschach, the best man in the super hero world.