You know, the concept is really good in my opinion. It just feels like you are pressing stuff that would make three or four chapters into one. I mean, it wasn't for example even mentioned that the dragon or human travelled together. Since when did he accept the dragon as a companion? Or what about the humans behavior if he really just arrived? Doesn't he want to find a way home? You know, this story just needs explaining. A lot of stuff happened, but it confuses slightly because it happens so suddenly without being properly explained.

So good concept, but a bit stuffed together.