Sunset is collasping under the stress, she can't handle the chaos that Anon-a-miss had brought upon her, so she tries to end it all, but happened instead will change her forever, for the better or worst..
And now Sunset survived her suicide and will slowly go back to her demon side. Well, now everyone is screwed, way to go Cantelot High students and teachers, way to 'FUCKING' go.
7776777 Only being truthful cause I do like Sunset and to not kill herself like that, but this just gotten to a new darker if I'm correct on this one. Though I wonder what's going to happen next anyway.
Honestly two chapters in and I have no clue what's happening really. I'm still going to read to see where this goes but this all kind of seems so over dramatic.
7777621 I'm always open to suggestons, but be warned, I only write the story that plays in my head, so outside suggestions will often be set aside in favor of how I see the story play through.
WOAH FILLIES............So Sunset survived shooting herself in her neck, maybe she should try pushing on the portal and if it's open she could just go back to Equestria and her old teacher/mother figure. I always thought of Princess Celestia was Sunsets adoptive mother in the movie's and comics, I even had a theory on how that happened.
Man, I really want to see how much further down this goes to. Really wanted to see an Anon-a-Miss story where Sunset goes back to being evil, will be eagerly waiting for more.
7778299 the only story that I know of, that come close is ''The most important lesson'' where Sunset revert back to her former somewhat 'Lone Wolf' schtick.... But it's short, incomplete and probably dead
I also world like to see more 'anon-a-miss' stores where Sunset just goes ''they want a monster... fine, they'll get a monster!'' There is just too few of them...
Well, the fact that Sunset is now undead or possibly immortal is interesting. Whether she is undead or not depends on whether or not she had actually died from the shot or was just rendered unconscious. Looks like she actually died given the fact that blood stopped pumping given that she wasn't actively bleeding when she woke up. Still it would be interesting to see Sunset disappear for a while to let the CMC really get scared when she appears and to let them stew in their guilt. That sounds delicious.
7779972 Well in my imagination, other MLP fans come up with rumors or ideas that Sunset is Celestia’s daughter. So in my conclusion, Princess Celestia is an immortal being, so maybe some parts of her immortality must’ve past on to Sunset in brith.
OMFG! Sunset woke up from the dead?! HOLY SHIT MY BABY IS SO STRONG! Also I want to mureder just Appleboom now. That was just so, so low especially for her. You’re doing good with this!
And now Sunset survived her suicide and will slowly go back to her demon side. Well, now everyone is screwed, way to go Cantelot High students and teachers, way to 'FUCKING' go.
7776770 I can't tell if you're being cynical or being truthful.
7776777 Only being truthful cause I do like Sunset and to not kill herself like that, but this just gotten to a new darker if I'm correct on this one. Though I wonder what's going to happen next anyway.
Honestly two chapters in and I have no clue what's happening really. I'm still going to read to see where this goes but this all kind of seems so over dramatic.
Good story, a bit of confusing with how sunset survive the gunshot.
7777335 You'll find out later in the story, no spoilers
7777051 I'm sorry, but I'm trying to keep everything readable without an editor, sorry.
7777533 Now now, what fun would that be. Not much I tell you, it is much more fun to drag them through the consequences of their actions
7777519 It's all right, in fact while I can't exactly edit it for you I would be willing to give advice on the chapters and how to improve them.
7777621 I'm always open to suggestons, but be warned, I only write the story that plays in my head, so outside suggestions will often be set aside in favor of how I see the story play through.
7777632 Trust me I know how that can be, though it's always good to hear a readers opinion on a story.
7777649 It often influences the story be better than ever could be without, but I thought I'd give fair warning to al those with suggestions.
7777666 Would you want me to do the suggestion here or would you want me to PM you about it?
WOAH FILLIES............So Sunset survived shooting herself in her neck, maybe she should try pushing on the portal and if it's open she could just go back to Equestria and her old teacher/mother figure. I always thought of Princess Celestia was Sunsets adoptive mother in the movie's and comics, I even had a theory on how that happened.
7777674 Here or there, it matters none, as long I'm notified by the site (I get side tracked easily).
Man, I really want to see how much further down this goes to. Really wanted to see an Anon-a-Miss story where Sunset goes back to being evil, will be eagerly waiting for more.
Something tells me Sunset's demon didn't quite agree with her decision.
Btw, my canon name for her demon side isn't Sunset Satan like most people use. I prefer Sundown Shatter. Just tossing that out if you like it too.
7778299 the only story that I know of, that come close is ''The most important lesson'' where Sunset revert back to her former somewhat 'Lone Wolf' schtick....
But it's short, incomplete and probably dead
I also world like to see more 'anon-a-miss' stores where Sunset just goes ''they want a monster... fine, they'll get a monster!''
There is just too few of them...
7778539 Maybe not yet, but it will soon enough, unless something happens and I change my mind.
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Well please don't change your mind unless it's to make Sunset decide to get revenge as everyone's favorite demon girl.
Well, the fact that Sunset is now undead or possibly immortal is interesting. Whether she is undead or not depends on whether or not she had actually died from the shot or was just rendered unconscious. Looks like she actually died given the fact that blood stopped pumping given that she wasn't actively bleeding when she woke up. Still it would be interesting to see Sunset disappear for a while to let the CMC really get scared when she appears and to let them stew in their guilt. That sounds delicious.
UMMMM.... im not sure where the writer is going with this.
7779972
Well in my imagination, other MLP fans come up with rumors or ideas that Sunset is Celestia’s daughter. So in my conclusion, Princess Celestia is an immortal being, so maybe some parts of her immortality must’ve past on to Sunset in brith.
I’m just saying.
OMFG! Sunset woke up from the dead?! HOLY SHIT MY BABY IS SO STRONG! Also I want to mureder just Appleboom now. That was just so, so low especially for her. You’re doing good with this!