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Woah, Sunset shooting herself in a breakdown, didn't see that one coming.
And now Sunset survived her suicide and will slowly go back to her demon side. Well, now everyone is screwed, way to go Cantelot High students and teachers, way to 'FUCKING' go.
7776770 I can't tell if you're being cynical or being truthful.
7776777 Only being truthful cause I do like Sunset and to not kill herself like that, but this just gotten to a new darker if I'm correct on this one. Though I wonder what's going to happen next anyway.
Honestly two chapters in and I have no clue what's happening really. I'm still going to read to see where this goes but this all kind of seems so over dramatic.
Good story, a bit of confusing with how sunset survive the gunshot.
7777335 You'll find out later in the story
, no spoilers
7777051 I'm sorry
, but I'm trying to keep everything readable without an edito
r, sorry.
7777533 Now now
, what fun would that be. Not much I tell you
, it is much more fun to drag them through the consequences of their actions
7777519 It's all right, in fact while I can't exactly edit it for you I would be willing to give advice on the chapters and how to improve them.
7777621 I'm always open to suggestons
, but be warned
, I only write the story that plays in my head, so outside suggestions will often be set aside in favor of how I see the story play through.
7777632 Trust me I know how that can be, though it's always good to hear a readers opinion on a story.
7777649 It often influences the story be better than ever could be without
, but I thought I'd give fair warning to al those with suggestions.
7777666 Would you want me to do the suggestion here or would you want me to PM you about it?
WOAH FILLIES............So Sunset survived shooting herself in her neck, maybe she should try pushing on the portal and if it's open she could just go back to Equestria and her old teacher/mother figure. I always thought of Princess Celestia was Sunsets adoptive mother in the movie's and comics, I even had a theory on how that happened.
7777674 Here or there, it matters none, as long I'm notified by the site (I get side tracked easily).
Man, I really want to see how much further down this goes to. Really wanted to see an Anon-a-Miss story where Sunset goes back to being evil, will be eagerly waiting for more.
Something tells me Sunset's demon didn't quite agree with her decision.
Btw, my canon name for her demon side isn't Sunset Satan like most people use. I prefer Sundown Shatter. Just tossing that out if you like it too.
7778299 the only story that I know of, that come close is ''The most important lesson'' where Sunset revert back to her former somewhat 'Lone Wolf' schtick....
But it's short, incomplete and probably dead
I also world like to see more 'anon-a-miss' stores where Sunset just goes ''they want a monster... fine, they'll get a monster!''
There is just too few of them...
7778539 Maybe not yet, but it will soon enough, unless something happens and I change my mind.
7778604
Well please don't change your mind unless it's to make Sunset decide to get revenge as everyone's favorite demon girl.
Well they got exactly what they wanted in the end.
Well, the fact that Sunset is now undead or possibly immortal is interesting. Whether she is undead or not depends on whether or not she had actually died from the shot or was just rendered unconscious. Looks like she actually died given the fact that blood stopped pumping given that she wasn't actively bleeding when she woke up. Still it would be interesting to see Sunset disappear for a while to let the CMC really get scared when she appears and to let them stew in their guilt. That sounds delicious.
....I have no words other than those three girls are gonna pay.
This is really getting good now!
can't wait to see what happens next
And the bomb has exploded.
I'm hoping it's Sunset's demon taking control. Sundown Shatter, Queen of Fire!
7804910 And upon her throne of pyre
, they're ashes shall rain down!
Sorry, but not in this fanfic
, but it seems like a good idea.
7804949
No no, it's Pyre Throne. Cause pyre is a noun not adjective.
Will it at least be her demon whispering to her? Guiding her actions if not outright controlling Them?
7805303 DING DING DING
, we got a winner, but the 'monster' inside her is no longer a demon
, her inner demon is going to be called Righteous Fury and that should give you all you need to know about her.
7805393 Kinda sounds like a Stand.
Oh man wait tills he finds out who was responisble, Not even Big Mac will be able to stop her, with Apple jack!
Have this image of her calmly walking towards Apple Bloom her sister, and brother being dragged along begging and pleading before she throws them off and grabs apple Bloom and walks off with her holding Bloom.
And at that moment, I can hear Samuel's Adagio for Strings as their hearts were torn and filled to the brim with guilt and misunderstanding. Unable to escape the fact that an innocent girl who has taken the fall of an Internet scandal is dead because of their neglect and indifference. At least, that's what they assumed.
I wouldn't be surprised if she's lashing out from rage.
...*Slowly claps* Congratulations Human world, you showed just how Shitty you guys are; infact you stooped into a much lower low even for Bully Sunset. Congrats on going to that level.
On another note: Oh, I hope she just burns the whole school and just leave it to burn. Goes through the portal explain to Twilight why she like that and have Pony-princess release her fury. I just hope this doesn't becomes another 'she forgives them' stories because this just is...
-Quote from Joker, The Killing Joke.
...this is fucked up...I kinda like it.
I kinda hope to see everyone lash out on apple bloom
7815464
That quote is surprisingly fitting, seeing as she going full Joker right now.
this is interesting, when's the next chapter?
7901748 Soon actually, I'm almost done.
I am thinking next chapter Twilight would want to avenged Poor old Sunset.
Affectively: caused by, or expressing emotion or feeling; emotional.
Effectively: in a way that produces a desired result.
PS: Can hardly wait for the next chapter....
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7908696 Sorry, I try to catch those
, but every now and then one slips by.
Maybe it's a bit early in the story for this, but meh
I can't wait to see how Big Mac reacts, he'll be destroyed by what he done, if Sunset doesn't break free to go after him and the others again.
To condone means to allow, so Pinkie's basically asking how they could've stooped so low that they'd applaud the attacks instead of allowing them, which doesn't make sense.
Also, Pinkie has chloroform in her hair, and no one's gonna question it? That's kinda creepy. Like, what's she doing with chloroform?
As for the chapter overall, I wasn't too impressed. The emotions were too rushed to actually feel, the confessions didn't really get me because it's something we should've been shown rather than told about, the conflict was resolved by Pinkie ex machina, and Sergeant Badge really needs to stop putting her hands on other people's mouths.
I also suggest using a term other than "Humane Six". It's just such a meta term that it hurts immersion.
too late shes dead and the demon has possed her body
also Chloroform!? are we just going to glaze over that!? XD
7910696 Shh.
7910696 It seemed more like she went demon because she went berserk. Like a demonic hulk kinda thing