Warframe: Relic Hunters
Character Bio’s #1
The other bio's will be every 2 chapters and will show off new characters. this will only happen if there's new characters.
Excalibur: Balance Frame (With Dendra Armor)
• Messy-Black hair with blue tips at the end
• Neon-Blue eyes
• White jacket with red strips running up the arms and the sides of the zipper, black and grey trainers, black jeans and a red shirt
• Personality: Cocky
• Weapons: Dragon Nikana, Prisma Skana, Lex Prime, Dread
Valkyr: Berserker frame
• Long-Black hair with orange tips at the end
• Orange eyes
• Wears orange T-shirt with black shorts and black trainers
• Personality: Happy
• Weapons: Lecta, dual cestra, Vectis Prime
Chroma: Elemental frame (Eye and Hair colour can change with energy colour)
• Short-Spiky red hair
• Black eyes
• Wears Crimson hoodie, black cargo pants with charcoal shoes
• Personality: Heavy (TF2)
• Weapons: Boar, Jac Kittag, gammacor
I will probably not continue reading the story but I will however leave some constructive criticism. Punctuation is not an optional thing and you need to end all sentences with it. The only exception would be when someone is speaking, then you'd end like this:
"This is an examle,"
See the comma used there at the end?
"This is also an example," Said the voice in my head.
Same thing here: A comma inside the quotation marks but the part after still ends with proper punctuation, also note that the S in said was capitalized.
Now go out there and improve while keeping those that continue to read happy.
Chroma Personality: Heavy(TF2)
Made my Day
I am Heavy Weapons Guy