I love the ending despite a few grammar errors, but I loved it and it's so true! In fact I'm trying to write one with an ending like this but I'm alittle short on ideas to get up to that point. So could I get some ideas from you or somepony else in the comments? Please?
This was a beautiful and sweet chapter I'm happy that they where able to talk it out and tell each other about how feel and where able to get together.
Anon wraps Molestia into an embrace and chucks the rock out an open window. They spend that brief moment in bliss as their hearts settle. The start of a relationship doesn’t have to be perfect. If you really love them and they love you, then it’ll all work out in the end.
I love the last two sentences here. They are indeed true, but at the same time, you have to be careful. There are some messed-up people out there. Ones that will notice how you feel, and mess with your head till you are a broken mess. That takes a while to heal from. Heck, I am still healing from it and it has been over a year now.
Anon jerks slightly at that sudden question. His hand mashing against Luna’s clit. She feels her pussy wink as she lets out a moan. She’s just as quick to bite her lip as Anon removes the sponge from her.
I'm just going to put it out here how I really hate how the whole thing just ended because of a question. I was getting intrigued by the whole thing and was hoping the it will lead to something more! Urgh.
7590954 YES ALL ZEE LOVE
Heehee~ Wish that more people could see this fic.
nice
I love the ending despite a few grammar errors, but I loved it and it's so true!
In fact I'm trying to write one with an ending like this but I'm alittle short on ideas to get up to that point.
So could I get some ideas from you or somepony else in the comments? Please?
This was a beautiful and sweet chapter I'm happy that they where able to talk it out and tell each other about how feel and where able to get together.
Called it!
And then... They cuddled!
I love the last two sentences here. They are indeed true, but at the same time, you have to be careful. There are some messed-up people out there. Ones that will notice how you feel, and mess with your head till you are a broken mess. That takes a while to heal from. Heck, I am still healing from it and it has been over a year now.
Messed up but okay
I'm just going to put it out here how I really hate how the whole thing just ended because of a question. I was getting intrigued by the whole thing and was hoping the it will lead to something more! Urgh.