Equestria is broken, damaged beyond all repair. Maybe. But sometimes, a little dirt and goo can piece it back together. Just with a new... sheen... to things!
Let it be said that this story is utterly amazing and I can't wait for some Serious Twilight Asskicking, and the other Elements aswell. I Guess it will be to much to hope for them to walk into the Palace Reservoir Dogs style
Those Nobles are soo boned though, I almost feel sorry for them .... then again, I really don't
7761077 All my nope to this one, clopfics on fimfiction are as common as dirt, quality stories are not. I would much rather get the later than the former.
This version is far better. I read a few chapters of the original, and it was straight to the fetishes of corruption and sex. From the start, while slower, this one sets out a better grasp of what the potential end-game might be, and it shows more, well humanity technically isn't the proper term, but it shows more of who they were, rather than what they are. Plus, the original seemed to be a more thinly veiled foalcon fetish story from the start. Not having that present here also lends far more weight to the story and plot.
So, good job, enjoyable content thus far. Pacing might be considered a pinch on the slow side, but I like it myself.
I hope that archdevil Twilight, being the most monster-like of the demon crew, acts the most un-pony like. As in, her behaviors are genuinely unnerving and incomprehensible to old pony sensibilities.
Whilst yes I'm glad to see this revived I can't help but appreciate the original more. Can't wait for more! Especially when the two catch up! This one seems to be going at a much slower pace.
Had a hypertensive crisis last night, which basically means my blood pressure got up into the 'so high you could stroke from it' range. So, for the foreseeable future I am placing the story on hiatus as I get my health managed. This doesn't mean there will not be an update, but it means it will be an unintended surprise if there is one.
Sorry for doing this, but I am a firm believer that I should accurately reflect my status on here, not leave you all guessing.
Gee Fel Equestria, how come your author lets you have TWO updates?
Great to see an other chapter of this story again I was so hopping to see more soon
8088235 Oh, he's just nice that way.
Anyway, great chapter and I can't WAIT to see what happens next!
The Fel Seven are back in Equestria, and methinks she and her citizens won't know what hit 'em!
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter, when I think we'll REALLY start getting into the nitty-gritty of things!
So good. Can't wait for the next update!
Let it be said that this story is utterly amazing and I can't wait for some Serious Twilight Asskicking, and the other Elements aswell.
I Guess it will be to much to hope for them to walk into the Palace Reservoir Dogs style
Those Nobles are soo boned though, I almost feel sorry for them .... then again, I really don't
From the way the portal behaved i half expected Twilight turning out bigger than a house.
8088481 She's packed on a few pounds, astrally speaking!
A corrupt soul, justly taken,
an inocent soul, villingly given,
the wail of world forever pierced,
dark god now walk the mortal world.
7761077 All my nope to this one, clopfics on fimfiction are as common as dirt, quality stories are not. I would much rather get the later than the former.
update yea,
good chapters, better detail i like it. oh please keep it up
Double update?? Awsome!
8088651 Nicely put.
And SO very accurate.
This version is far better. I read a few chapters of the original, and it was straight to the fetishes of corruption and sex. From the start, while slower, this one sets out a better grasp of what the potential end-game might be, and it shows more, well humanity technically isn't the proper term, but it shows more of who they were, rather than what they are. Plus, the original seemed to be a more thinly veiled foalcon fetish story from the start. Not having that present here also lends far more weight to the story and plot.
So, good job, enjoyable content thus far. Pacing might be considered a pinch on the slow side, but I like it myself.
I hope that archdevil Twilight, being the most monster-like of the demon crew, acts the most un-pony like. As in, her behaviors are genuinely unnerving and incomprehensible to old pony sensibilities.
was listening to this at the end there.
truly makes you feel like things are going to get better eventually.
Every comment is like this exquisite little candy, perks me up to see them, and makes me feel good for the efforts expended. Thank you all. ^_^
The forsaken return
awwww yeah, I'm loving this story. I've read the original and thought it was good piece of work, but this? this piece is phenomenal
8092361 I agree with this comment.....
Whilst yes I'm glad to see this revived I can't help but appreciate the original more. Can't wait for more! Especially when the two catch up! This one seems to be going at a much slower pace.
8118699 I agree with you, I cant wait for more chapters and updates,
Hi guys,
Had a hypertensive crisis last night, which basically means my blood pressure got up into the 'so high you could stroke from it' range. So, for the foreseeable future I am placing the story on hiatus as I get my health managed. This doesn't mean there will not be an update, but it means it will be an unintended surprise if there is one.
Sorry for doing this, but I am a firm believer that I should accurately reflect my status on here, not leave you all guessing.
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that is understandable, hope things get better for you
Well, and now I'm back and there are whole two chapters to meet me, hooraaaaay
Anyway, get well! For yours and all ours sake(and I saw that blog. Be waiting) :D