This world is dangerous. I almost died as soon as I got here by means I don't understand, and it feels like its only going to get worse. At least this sword that saved my life will help even the odds.
This is an excellent story you have set up here! My only regret is that there is no more chapters right at the moment. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Keep up the great work you have here.
Two cliffhangers in a row... oof.
I'm liking what I'm seeing so far, so keep it up!
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What can i say? Its a talent. Gotta leave people wanting to know what happens next
Hmm... This is good. I'm impressed.
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Thanks! Im glad to hear that you are enjoying the story!
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It's almost like that new fic I made but my main character is a dwarf.
This is getting pretty good.
One style point:
Personally, I would have written it : trio of blue diamonds . But that's just me and my observations of Twilight's patterns.
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Thanks for pointing that out! I was rather sleep deprived when i wrote this, haha
Thank you for the watch as well!
I just got caught up with your series so far. I really like it. I do hope to see more in the feature.
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Im glad to hear that you're enjoying the story so far!
This is an excellent story you have set up here! My only regret is that there is no more chapters right at the moment. I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Keep up the great work you have here.
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Thanks! Im glad to hear that you're enjoying the story so far! Next chapter shouldnt take much longer!
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Nice! I can't wait.
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Thanks for catching that! I dont know what happened there, but chapter 2 is back now!
I'm really liking this! One suggestion, for the PoV switch, I would either put Twilight's PoV or Liam's PoV just so we know who we're following.