This world is dangerous. I almost died as soon as I got here by means I don't understand, and it feels like its only going to get worse. At least this sword that saved my life will help even the odds.
Yeah, taking the time to acknowledge someone struggling after so much time passed without any basic human (well petting seems more pony) interactions is a good move for this story. Personally, it feels like something that should continue to be done throughout some of the later chapters. Though that is ultimately up to you.
8984273 I admit, i want to explore what these events have done to Sunlight's mental state a bit more. It will definitely be a reoccurring thing in this story.
Aww this is so sad in a good way
Yeah, taking the time to acknowledge someone struggling after so much time passed without any basic human (well petting seems more pony) interactions is a good move for this story. Personally, it feels like something that should continue to be done throughout some of the later chapters. Though that is ultimately up to you.
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I admit, i want to explore what these events have done to Sunlight's mental state a bit more. It will definitely be a reoccurring thing in this story.
Thanks for taking the time to give feedback!
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petting is human enough, we just have too big veriety of comfort and discomfort zones